No problem with the text here, either.
It's great seeing how much effort you put into everything, from the armors, weapons and even the backgrounds. The Pelican interiors in particular really stand out to me as being fantastic. That being said, I know foliage is hard to draw, so some serious credit for the forest scenes! The vines and crap all over them was a very nice touch. Cool to see that this is a continuation from the Dog Tags story, with Wasp stepping onto the ship. Speaking of Wasp, hilarious that she wound up getting injured from slamming to the ground. Guess I never really considered the force a Spartan Slam would really have, even in-game (despite the fact it can kill someone.. could just be from having a half ton of Spartan landing on your head). Also gotta love the "Oh shit, we've been hit. Well... see ya, Pilot!" *jump*
Overall, well worth the problems you had. I hope this thing gets a bunch of attention, because you put a LOT of work into it.