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As she stood in her red gown Only ailing eyes be frown Beauty is found deep within Lest it is only a noun I am not a poet by any means ...


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A work of an art is a work of a heart
As she stood in her red gown
Only ailing eyes be frown
Beauty is found deep within
Lest it is only a noun

I am not a poet by any means but giving critique on such an art of marvel inspired by a great poet, I could not find nay better words to start this.

First once again , really impressed by your positioning of the model in relation to back ground. Her Costume colors and the background are blending in so well that it is a treat to watch. The moment I saw it I wanted to give a critique on this piece.

Coming to the techinical points, The brightness of imgae is just perfect so is the color contrast. I love how the roses appear a slightly more redish than other red things. its just gives roses that much charcater in this whole image. The color blancing over all is quiet accurate, and as I have already discussed her positining in relation to background and how well it blends in with it, once again you get perfect marks for technique.

Now to her dress , once again it is absolutely beautiful from head to toe. Whoever made this costume knew exactly what poet, Charles Baudelaire was thinking. There is not much I can say here because my words seems too insignificant

Originality hmmm now that is a tough one, the Image can't be original because it is inspired by poem however giving you low score on originality will be very very unfair because, sometimes its easier to make original images than to portray one form of art into another. In your case a poem into a photograph. And you seem to have done great job here. So regradless it is original or not I gave you 4 stras on it.

Make is done well however I would have preffered a sharper make up. It is elegently done but sadly in my opinion has not been able to transform poets words into reality.

One issue I had with your imgae last time I gave critique still persists that is model and her involvement in this whole scene. She is looking pretty and no one can take it away from her but she is giving some expressions but I dont find them befitting to whole setting.The Title of this work is "Dance of death" but by looking at her expression once can hardly tell she is doing a dance of death.

Overall I loved this piece from you, it feeds all techincal aspects and I can totally see all the hard work gone into this work. The two shortcoming in my opinion are from Model and make up artist, as a photographer you have dont nothing wrong but everything 100% right. So THUMBS UP for you.

Once again I would like to say is subjective to my taste and perception, I can be wrong or right but I have given my opinion in all honesty. I hope that my opinion is helpful to you.
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Star-hawks Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2018
Hi I'm interested in your art work it's very good actually it's great and I was wondering if you could do this thing I had in mind. It's a fusion of thispre00.deviantart.net/ae32/th/p… and thisvignette.wikia.nocookie.net/p_… please?
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GudServo Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can try !! what do u have in mind...

There are two things I wanna say here
1. I do linearts so my drawing is not very good, actually its horrible but I can still try

2. Im busy so the work will be slow

 But I'll give it a try
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Star-hawks Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2018
it's fine but it's not horrible it's great!
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GudServo Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so what do u want me to do, I understand its a fusion but what the outcome is like? Told ya total nuts in drawing
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NinePrisms Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2018
Thank you so much for watching my art, it means a ton to me that you enjoyed my work enough to want to see more! :love:
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GudServo Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No thanks needed, you deserve it
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NinePrisms Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2018
:hug:
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Christina-UK Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2018
Thank you for the watch +fav 
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V-kony Featured By Owner May 15, 2018  Hobbyist
THX 4 the fav and watch! :)
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GudServo Featured By Owner May 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No need for thanks your art is wonderful
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