Grusart
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- Sep 7, 1993
- Norway
- Deviant for 19 years
- grusart.tumblr.com
- She / Her
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You're very welcome! I see that the lines are really pencil looking indeed, which would be possibly to imitate with a photoshop brush, but that is not important. 
Critiques can be used not only for improving a piece, but also to let the artist know what to do better in the future.
I wish you good luck!
Critiques can be used not only for improving a piece, but also to let the artist know what to do better in the future.I wish you good luck!
I'm starting to enjoy writing them!
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This is really good. The textures on the picture gives it a fantastic touch, and the colors you've chosen seem very harmonic. Though it's just a simple background, I think it'd do well with a slightly darker area to make the character stand out a bit more. (I might of course be wrong)
It is a really nice design. What I see is that the orange/brown line on its forehead isn't even in thickness on each side, which sort of disturbs the rest of the face.
Anatomy wise this is quite interesting. I assume it isa part of the design that there's an extra joint on the hind legs. That is pretty cool, but as in a lot of your other pictures, I find the hind legs really odd-looking, due to the knee's position and build-up. I am no master of this myself, but I suggest that you start doing studies of animals and their anatomy (It's in fact pretty fun - and you'll learn a lot from it, believe me!)
The next thing I'd like to point out, is the fluffy rows around jaw, neck and back. I love that idea, and it looks gorgeous, but:
Angle-wise, the creature's right side should be less shown. In this picture both left and right fluff shows evenly, which makes its right fluff seem longer than the left.
I took me the liberty of redlining your picture a bit to show what I think is more correct according to the angle.
Other that what's said, the eyes are not appearing to be the same size, as well as different kinds of tinystuff. I love that the eyes are bright blue, and as a suggestion I would've tried to repeat the color on the tail by giving it irises.
You've done a magnificent job on this, and I can see that you've worked hard on it. I am looking forward to see more pictures of this creature, and maybe get to see more of its design, as its back and belly is rather hidden.
