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The World

Just Finished:)

The World(2012)
Marker,Pen,ink,etc on paper
Image details
Image size
768x1055px 686.4 KB
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/4 second
Focal Length
100 mm
ISO Speed
Date Taken
Jun 30, 2012, 7:02:48 AM
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© 2012 - 2021 greno89
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Azelpraer's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I can honestly say that I like the use of contrast the outer lines bleed into inner lines like some beautiful head on collision. Her veins look like trees that can represent, life or tragedy. But what as a viewer what I do? Is she conveying to me a message? or is that just my mind wanting to see a message? or is it just up to me? if its up to me then I'm lost Its surreal pop art I have to take her as face value and that would be a shame. Its bright, its assertive the lack of background demands this... but yet again I would have to just write this off as surreal pop art and a testament to your ego not expression. I'm asking for a hint for a key if you will to open a door that will give my eyes clues as to what you as an artiest are saying to me the viewer. Is the flower, the red streaks, the intricate shapes metaphors? or is this just a pop culture magazine in the making? Show me your power (if it is present in this piece) show me the screw ups the doubts the love the joy, I see the shell and it is beautiful it locks my eyes in. but I'm having a hard time seeing whats inside the shell. bold is great you will sell t-shirts and perhaps even some band will want your work for a album cover. People will go wow thats pretty wow nice work . But meaning and emotion, that is the kind of stuff that will make your art last for years and years. It can arouse and inspire someone and be as a symbol for hope or empowerment. Beautiful yes, talented yup. but my question to you is whats on the inside of your work? if anything at all.
katr14's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I don´t know how you figured this piece of art out. You know the inspiration behind this, but it truly is inspirering. I am inspired by just looking at it, and I wonder, what was yours? I am looking at this piece of art, and I am speechless. This pieve of art moves me emotionally. It´s like the person has a headache. It rains. All is so damn complicated, but still this person looks complicated. I think for me this is a really great expression of a humanbeing in the messy modern world. I am wow. I am stunned. You have a really great sence of colors. The composition is spot on, and WOW. Top score from me, and you dare change anything!
gabibowen98's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
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I see nothing too critique. It is creative and proportionate and has a lot of detail. Honestly, the only thing I can really think of is if you wanted to make the woman's face more appealing, you could make the lips fuller or adjust her eyes into a different way to set of an emotion. What your painting or drawing says has a lot to do with body language and you are already doing a good job portraying it, but if you really want to, you could tweak a few things and really define what you are trying to say. Sorry to lecture but I have to fill the 100 word minimum :/ hahaha
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
said no. She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and
again he replied with a no. She had heard enough. As she walked... See Moreaway, tears streaming down her f......ace the...
... See Moreboy grabbed her arm and said.... You're not pretty
you're beautiful. Idon't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And Iwouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die...
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥.......Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love willrealize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school,anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you breakthis chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems forthe next ten years. If you post this to 15
pages in 15 minutes, you're safe
Frozx398's avatar
wow!!! very beautiful!
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Catscendence's avatar
This is simply..breathtaking! Your work is just so unique and you take care of every detail with such a!
unspoken411's avatar
holy shit dude...your talent is superb. If your not making mad money from your art, you should be...
bear48's avatar
very inpressive
mks-7zdesigns's avatar
Superb talent. Your attention to detail is amazing. Fav'd!
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lovelikecrazygirl's avatar
The different textures and colors you bring into your works is incredible. They tell a story, and no matter how long you stare at them or try and get the whole story you have to keep coming back because there is another element the next time. It's addicting.
Zoeava's avatar
Your artwork is incredible. I find myself staring at it for long periods of time. I've never seen art like yours before.
xlookdeepinsidex's avatar
Damn it, you're unbelievable.
MissLaurelle's avatar
this is beautiful, ope to be in your gallery some day :)
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mel-face's avatar
I love your work so much, and this is no exception. I feel bad that I can't give a critique, but I just don't see anything that needs to be improved upon. Your style is so developed and wonderful!
jasmineablesan's avatar
wow....your sooo talented
AdryannSeriel's avatar
like always the precision of your work is amazing.
the effects works to like the anatomy and perspective. but one element attract my view. the bloody flower on the left boob. i don't like it because it has to 2d, i lost the illusion of 3d finally i see only the flower and not all the picture :(
greno89's avatar
Thank you. I was keep thinking about that.
wwitb09's avatar
Very excellent. You did a great job on this piece.
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