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I see you in dreams by GreenGirl225 I see you in dreams :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 15 3 Demon Three by GreenGirl225 Demon Three :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 8 6 Dark side of the Moon by GreenGirl225 Dark side of the Moon :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 15 0 Eyes everywhere by GreenGirl225 Eyes everywhere :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 11 6 Madness by GreenGirl225 Madness :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 9 8 Scetchy Plague by GreenGirl225 Scetchy Plague :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 31 3 Flying doom by GreenGirl225 Flying doom :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 3 0 Hatred by GreenGirl225 Hatred :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 25 0 Naxther by GreenGirl225 Naxther :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 18 0 Fight in the Darkness by GreenGirl225 Fight in the Darkness :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 8 0 Fire Red by GreenGirl225 Fire Red :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 13 0 Archimedes by GreenGirl225 Archimedes :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 14 2 Hearts by GreenGirl225 Hearts :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 13 5 Boredom between classes by GreenGirl225 Boredom between classes :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 12 3 Daneel by GreenGirl225 Daneel :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 10 2 Mimi by GreenGirl225 Mimi :icongreengirl225:GreenGirl225 11 8


Badass Carlnes by aenaluck Badass Carlnes :iconaenaluck:aenaluck 1,154 27 Delta Operative STOCK XII by PhelanDavion Delta Operative STOCK XII :iconphelandavion:PhelanDavion 180 2 Death's Carousel by sandara Death's Carousel :iconsandara:sandara 5,784 165 Welcome to the End of the World by Teradiam Welcome to the End of the World :iconteradiam:Teradiam 2,218 101 Songkran Festival2018 by aenaluck Songkran Festival2018 :iconaenaluck:aenaluck 726 16 All 4 enjoy the bath together by aenaluck All 4 enjoy the bath together :iconaenaluck:aenaluck 905 28
How to Hook a Reader
I should note that this article will be primarily concerning YA fiction, as that is what I know most about. You may notice that some of these openings use elements that I cautioned against in an earlier article. Told ‘ya there were bountiful exceptions to writing “rules.”

The Voyage of the Dawn Treader by C.S. Lewis
“There was a boy called Eustace Clarence Scrubb, and he almost deserved it.”

This one is just awesome. I adore some subtle humor in a book, and it’s a great way to start out if you’re witty enough. This short and amusing opening line tells us a lot about the character in a very short time. His name also gives an indication that he is not from the land of Narnia, but is probably from England, if this book is to be similar to the ones prior to it in the series. We know something about his age in t
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Carlnes took off his shirt by aenaluck Carlnes took off his shirt :iconaenaluck:aenaluck 987 27 The Isle - Carebearing by IsisMasshiro The Isle - Carebearing :iconisismasshiro:IsisMasshiro 2,529 335 Master and Argis pack by aenaluck
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Master and Argis by aenaluck Master and Argis :iconaenaluck:aenaluck 669 18 Elena by aenaluck Elena :iconaenaluck:aenaluck 762 22 CROSSBOW STOCK I by PhelanDavion CROSSBOW STOCK I :iconphelandavion:PhelanDavion 150 14 Time for his wife(again) by aenaluck Time for his wife(again) :iconaenaluck:aenaluck 1,094 42 Carlnes cleaning his sword by aenaluck Carlnes cleaning his sword :iconaenaluck:aenaluck 1,089 27 Navera! by MischievousRaven Navera! :iconmischievousraven:MischievousRaven 122 22




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sylverface Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you for the :llama:  =D
merlinus79 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the Loki Fav.
ARTIST-SRF Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Teradiam Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2015  Student General Artist
Thanks for the favorite!! :D

P.S: I love your plague doctor mask :heart:
GreenGirl225 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2015
thank you :)
and no worries! love the drawing <3
DegasClover Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you for the :iconfavbomb-plz:  on my Loki (pencil drawing) fanart 
I really apreciate it :happybounce:
I have other similar items in my gallery if you would be interested , or watch me if you would like to see more. 
Please visit again soon Meow :3 
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