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Chapter 5 Exercises
Okay, so first off this is freaking long And I know I say it everytime, but I really tried to keep it short! So bear with me please! Second. With my characters, this is the first draft stuff and things are STILL changing so yes, I am aware of the multiple names that begin with the same letteing and have plans to change them all in my growing list of characters and their roles.
Task 1: Plot Premises
Sheridan–Primary Protagonist– Is an 16-year-old slave who dreams of freedom and adventure. She has a strong connection to Magic and the Seraphim.
Evangeline–Secondary Antagonist– Is an deranged woman trying to resurrect the Seraphim Satriya.
(Sub) Secondary Protagonists
Camielia Brenner: Is an 16-year-old squire on the path of becoming a Divine knight.
Finnick (Finn) Rumm: Is an 18-year-old Phantom Warlock, a mission to avenge his master.
Lillianne Clearwater: Is an 18-year-old apprent
ACWAN Premise and Character List
Plot Premise: The story is about a protagonist named Brav who was a child soldier in training with two competing allied factions until one day enemy combatants appear in what should have been a safe training area. In reaction Brav's wanted to fight the enemy, but his efforts were impeded by his anger getting the better of him. Brav feels like the he has to survive the situation no matter what.
List of Characters (That matter)
Brav- Primary Protagonist- In the distant future lives a boy name Victor Bravery who is a child soldier in training and Provius Prospect and lives on a military installation. One day Brav receives orders to go to scout training where he comes face to face with the Red Crusaders. In reaction, Brav wants to kill them, however Brav's efforts are impeded by the instructor, unknown cyborg forces, and the enemy assassin the enemy is trying to get through the forest. Which he feels he needs to overcome.
1: Brav has been training for combat his entire life. All his time h
Creating Your Story's Narrator Excersice 5.5
I've decided to do my story in a Third-person narration. I am doing it in Third-person limited narration, since I'm pretty sure its the style I want to do. It's a Non-presence Narrator too, story told through the character eyes. I think... haha
Example of one of my chapters: (I've decided to leave out names for these examples. And this is still rough in the paragraphs, I apologize.)
"The wind blew violently—rattling the small basement window from the raging storm outside. It was almost doubtful the the tape sealing it would hold and (the protagonist) almost expected it to shatter. If it did, the problem wouldn't strictly be limited to the shattered glass all over the floor— and no doubt her feet— and the water spilling in. Her Aunt and Uncle could probably get away telling the officials her death was weather related when the room filled with water and she drowned.
ACWAN Characters 5.2 Ezalea Ceres
Tip 1: Create a list of all the attributes and ideas you have for your Protagonist.
- Roughly 5 feet 2 inches
- Weights about 90lbs
- Scrawny body, virtually no curves
- Dark brown hair that ends just past her shoulder blades, usually either tucked behind ears or worn in a ponytail
- Heart shaped face with light brown eyes and a small, slightly upturned nose
- Typically wears plain dresses, blouses and skirts all in dull colours; whites, browns and greys.
Ezalea’s parents are both merchants. Her father (Paterleon Ceres) was born and raised in the city whereas her mother (Kalos Ceres) comes from the neighbouring city of Hecate. She was a member of a merchant caravan that travelled between many cities, Journeys End being one of them. Somewhere between haggling over the price of goods the pair fell in love, got married, and Kalos decided to live in the city with her husband. When Ezalea was younger her family lived in the lower levels of the city, but af
AKA The demon
Shape - Humanoid
Height - 1.52 m
Complexion - Stocky
Skin tone - Pale gray
Facial attributes - Hidden
Others - Fingers have less sections than humans´ and restrains the use of tools somewhat. It´s feet does not have any toes. Genderless, but its actions made humans refer to it as a male being or an animal
Clothing and gear
Headwear - Metallic mask that covers the front, the sides and barely the back of the head. It´s shape is curved, with two pointy edges by the top sides. It ends near the jaw, without covering it, in a jagged shape. It would never remove it, as it thinks it protects its soul
Torso - A thick cuirass made from the previous metal, thicker within a single stripe coming from the crotch to its chest. It´s plain grey, somewhat darker but shinier than its skin´s. and does not have any kind of decoration. It´s the clothing it remembers it had spawned with and It´s rarely seen without
ACWAN Characters 5.1
1: The Primary Protagonist
2: The Secondary Protagonist
The Eighth Trap Master
3: The Primary Antagonist
4: The Secondary Antagonist
5: The Supporting Character
6: The Universe Filler Character
The Lord of Lemnos
The seven other peons Cassius convinced to join him
7: The Foil
Flavius and Rufus foil each other
Archimedes foils the Eighth Trap Master
Democritus foils Hector
8: The Narrator
Me. I write in the third person.
9: The Point-of-View (POV) Character
Mimas (Prologue only)
Additional Plot premises
Flavius is a soldier in the Journeys End military, an old classmate of Azalea’s and a lieutenant to captain Hector Marcellus. As a member of the cities upper class she is a staunch loyalist. While the rebellion looms ever closer she tries to convince her captain to remain loyal to the government,