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This critique stems from the fact that my eyesight isn't perfect so this will be why I will see things differently from others.

Overall, this is a very clean design with everything laid out in an extremely easy to read way. The description in the image as well as the obvious left and right buttons are a nice touch, as is the descriptions below the link. It's all there in black and white, just the way I like it.

My only flaws with this design are the stark contrast between the background and the bars next to the "Moda" logo. A darker grey would work nicely. My other thought is with the lack of contrast between the background and the text under the three subheadings. My vision causes similarly coloured objects to overlap or blend while large stark contrasts causes trails to appear below my eyes. Darker grey for the larger areas (the bars) and lighter text for the content text would work great, but keep in mind, this is what I see, so if everyone else sees differently, that's alright.

But in terms of simplicity, it works really well and the text spacing stands out, but in a good way. Great job!
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EnzuDes1gn Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
thanks man, but this is what happens when you take an ex street thug, who has no art training in any form, and try to do decent color contrast :(

I have much to learn, but I will be doing it my own way, i don't want to learn like everyone else :D
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Grayda Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Professional Photographer
haha don't worry about it. All of your designs are superb and I always check out your sites for inspiration ;)

You have your own style which appears in most of your work, and that's just awesome ;D
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EnzuDes1gn Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
:) right now my work will be not as much my own in it's look, as I am trying to learn other styles etc, but yea i always try to add a little me in there somewhere :D
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