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This Isn't Meant For You

Oh Marie,
Can't you see,
I can't risk our love,
That is to be.

We could be perfect,
And It'd be worth it,
But Marie,
It's not that easy.

I want to say how I feel,
To let you know it's all been real,
But I can't,
I guess this wound will never heal.

We're never to get through this,
Our love stuck in eternal drift,
Forever and ever our hearts linger on,
On the perfect love just not begun.

Marie.
This is a poem for the lost love, the one who you were too shy to go and get, the one who was the one and forever will be. This is a poem about Marie.

I love this poem I wrote because the words seem to string together so eloquently and so simply.

Feedback?

Gorpie
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gorpie Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2002
Thanks 4 d comment tom :D (Big Grin)

I think (and im not sure cos I wrote this ages ago) that it was supposed to be sort of a song, kinda, so when I wrote it (whilst singing) I extended vowels and whatnot. I see what u mean tho.

Me likee!

Gorpie
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tomking Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2002
nice, the beginning is a little odd (in my opinion) but i like, keep up the work.
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