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Commission for *Artomis! :rose:

Thanks for commissioning me :rose:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
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Wow Goldy, nice to see some art from you again! <3 I'm still new to critiques, so I hope this is helpful!

I love how intense this piece feels, and as always I love the amount of detail you packed in! Especially the fluff on the white character's jacket orz This really looks like a gruesome battle, and if I were actually there, I'd want to leave ASAP. x_x

The pouring rain makes it look like this fight would be miserable, and although you've got it splashing up from obstacles (wings, the scythe, etc), I feel that because the rain looks as though it's coming down heavy, there should be a little more emphasis on the splashing. Right now it looks as though it's splashing up from a light rain.

I also like how the background adds to the weather! Those clouds are pretty awesome! I don't know where these characters are fighting, but some dead/blood stained grass could help contribute to the feel of a deadly battle. I also think the lightning could use a little glow or something else to give it some more 'wow', like the rest of your picture does!

And the characters look awesome - they definitely look like they could be responsible for those wounds. There's a lot of blood near the white character's arm, and I just felt like the sleeve fluff should have a bit of dirt or blood on it as well. Other than that, s/he seems fine c: Upon closer inspection of the black character, I see that she's pouring blood, but I only see a few gashes? (Good job for having their wounds match up to their opponent's weapons, by the way!) She is a dark colored character though, so I might be missing some wounds.

I had a lot to type, but really it was about some of the smallest details. You did a really awesome job and you've managed to make me stare at a piece for a long time yet again! <3 Keep up the good work - I can't wait to see what you draw next! ^^
GoldeyWasHere's avatar
Thanks so much for the good critique, finally! ; u ;
Those obvious little details that I should have added make me wanna fix them so much but... maybe next time :'D

I actually drew lots of wounds for the black character but since she's so dark you can barely see them :P

But thank you again it sure was helpful <3
Pepper-Head's avatar
Oh, you're quite welcome! ❤
They are little details, but I don't think you should have to go fix it now, maybe just remember it for next time ;v; It still is one awesome drawing!

I figured there were a lot more wounds for the black character that I couldn't see xP Thank you for clearing that up with me though!

I'm glad my critique helped ;v; I'll try to give them more often if you want!
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I just want to say this is one of the best pieces of art i have seen from you following the picture "Guten Morgen" and "Disco heaven". I wish i was as lucky as Videri to have a girl like Mina in my life. Your art is atounding and it impresses me everytime i find a really funny or just plain amazing. the picture you just sent is truely amazing and i hope to see more from you. you continue to impress me with all your art works and that's why I'm a watcher. So that i can see when your next amazing artwork comes from. Thank you for the picture and i hope to see more amazing pictures from you. Keep up the good work. <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
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Your art work is so amazing, it makes me want to try even harder to be able to create beautiful art just like you.Drawing Awesome Face Icon
GoldeyWasHere's avatar
Thank you! :meow:
practice practice ;D
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VanitasDaBoom's avatar
That's really epic =D
nitroburner's avatar
Nothing in my Garbage, THERE'S NOTHING IN MY GARBAGE!
VanillaHellen's avatar

.....this deserves one of THESE comments . Totally . :stare: So prepare yourself, and your eyes ~~~

When I saw it on a thumbnail I already knew it's gonna be AMAZING but now I look closely and I know I was wrong, because it's far beyond "AMAZING" :iconwhutplz:
I mean just LOOK AT IT OMG ;______;

These POSES are awesome, I love how the dark character squats omg <3 And the blood here, just WHAT . :iconredheart-plz: It's so realistic and darrrrk <3

And I really love the rain effect > u < :heart:
Both the raining drops, and the water flowing down the characters . ;_;
It fits the picture GODDAMN GREAT I MEAN IT'S
so dark and bloody pciture, and the sahding just adds to it, I mean these parts of the characters where you ca't even see it good because it's so dark and because of rain ~ amazing effect girl !! ! <3

Whole picture is STUNNING . :iconwhutplz:
I could stare and stare and staaaareeee at itttttttt....

instant favourite girl . instant favourite . :stare:


I've JUST NOTICED how the blood falls down on grass (dark character) ;_____________; OMGAJSDKLaSJDKLASJ YOU DID GREAt JOB ON IT TOO IT LOOKS SO REALISTIC JUTS LASJDKLASJD <33
How are you doing blood? ;_; It's about colour, or blending, or just WHAT . :iconwthplz:

And hair looks amazing toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ;-;
I love it lovelovelove
it's so realistic
and dark
and bloody

the only thing it's missing are graves in farer background . XD

Though this lightning, compared to details in all image, looks kinda... wrong . Shall be more detailed, just like the rest .

OVerall, you did WONDERFUL job on this one, it's... I dunno, one of your best pictures so far ? ;-; :heart:

Amazing .


killmenow ; u ;
it's far too good

to excist .

; u ;


GoldeyWasHere's avatar
wwwwwwWWWHOOOOoooAAaaaaawwww O U O

You know I NEVER get tired of THESE kind of comments <3 <3 <3
I'm not very proud of that lightning I did back there either :'D Feels like I just totally forgot how to lightning :icony-u-noplz:
Then I also forgot about searching a reference oTL --wut.

But girl I'm so glad you like ;_; Thanks very much <333
VanillaHellen's avatar
Heheheheh I know <3 ~
That's why I decided it's time to get back to those . :eyes: ~~~ Or at last from time to time . XDDD;

Ffff XD Well, good thing it's not the main point of the drawing . |D;

You're welcome girl . <3
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this is not good! THIS DRAWING IS THE MOST EPIC PICTURE I SEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!! :iconpartycannonplz:
legarsraide's avatar
as dark as well done Goldy. you improved again on this kind of scene :clap:
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Probably your best art yet 8D
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Adaavantis's avatar
Oh my god, this picture looks so freaking amazing! You should give yourself a pat on the back, good job +faved!
GoldeyWasHere's avatar
*tries to pat herself on the back*

Thanks! :D
cabbij's avatar
Omg, this picture is so dark and bloody *.*
How are ya doing that? The blood always looks so realistic c:
I just wonder why nobody gave you a comment yet O.o
This picture is just amazing, I ttly love how you shaded the hair, it's so shiny 'n lovely lookin <3
The background is also realy nice, the lightning looks epic, I realy don't even know what to say anymore, because the longer I look at this picture, the more amazed I am
You're realy an awesome artist Goldey ^^ Keep it up
GoldeyWasHere's avatar
Thaaaankks <3!
And I dun really know.. people don't have anything to say :'D Just like me. oTL
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