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Artist // Hobbyist // Digital Art
  • Feb 16
  • Switzerland
  • Deviant for 3 years
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My Bio
17 y/o

Hobby writer and Hobby artist

Drawing Tool: MediBang Paint Pro

Favourite Movies
Wolverine and everything else Marvel related / Harry Potter
Favourite TV Shows
the originals, the 100, Game of Thrones
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
iron maiden, lorde, arctic monkeys, awolnation, cynic, halsey, hollywood undead, imagine dragons, set it off, skillet, son lux and tool
Favourite Books
Harry Potter
Favourite Writers
J.K. Rowling, Trudi Canavan
Favourite Games
Overwatch, League of Legends, Heroes of the Storm
Other Interests
Kickboxing, writing, reading

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Heyho ^-^

First of all - you've done a great job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

I like her hair a lot and the anatomy is also correct. - I can't say much about the line art - I didn't notice any errors there beside that her ear has to many lines in it though, it would have been enough to just ad one inner line since the ear is really smal and the shape of the cake seems a little to edgy.

You used a lot of different red shades in this piece - what I generally like but I think they don't go too well together. I think it would have been better to stay by 1 redtone and then experiment in make it lighter or darker or at least stay by a pinkish-red or an orange-red but not both.


The shading is pretty good, I think for the hairs you could have choosen slightly darker shades to give it more structure.

To her eye: I would remove the darkest color it doesn't go well with your line art and just stay with the yellow-orange-red.


If this comment helped you I would appreciate a visit in my gallery a lot ^-^
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Hey

I like your drawings and the details like the nut and the ornaments on his cloths shows that you've put a lot of work in your drawing. I like his friendly face and the bird is really adorable.

I think you've done well on the proportions and his anatomy but I think his foot is a little too tiny. I understand your concept with the perspective but you have to make the foot bigger or shade it more so that it's better visible that we can only see the front of the foot.

I think you could do stronger shadings in general, it would help to give the piece more depth.

The coloring has a lot of space to improve. You went over the lines at different parts of the drawings, that could be easely fixed, when you would draw the lines after the coloring again on top of the colors.

Overall you did a good job <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Tom Bombadil
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Hello there, let me give you the requested critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="25" height="20" alt=":wave:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="437" title="Hi!"/>

First of all: I really like the drawing, great work!

The concept isn't new but you well-implented it. I like how the street is done, it has that wet look. The shining and the reflections are also well done.

The drawing has a good depth too.

The street-light goes under a bit. Ther's so much going on in the left side of the picture and the latern-post is nearly invisible in the trees.

I'm not sure if this was your intention or not, but the people are like "melting together".

Anyway, great work - keep it up! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
UNDER ONE UMBRELLA  Decorative interior print
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Great work!

I like the character design a lot she is very shark-like, though. The pose and her face expression go very well together and show her personality. Your coloring looks very clean and professional and I like the colors you've chosen. I like how you make the transparent parts...your coloring is pretty flawless, there isn't much to say more than that.

Her anatomy is the typical loli anatomy but I think the feet are a little too big for a girl. I'm also a little irritated about the legs but I'm not sure what exactly it is, probably the proportion from the legs to her arms but I would not swear to it. I do also think, that her right-hand doesn't look very relaxed and kinda stiff, I think the main problem is the position of the thumb, you could work on that.

The background is very simple and a typical anime school scenario, I think that it's fitting even if it isn't very original.

The water looks not really like water to me but more like a jelly like substance. I can't draw water very well by myself but with an eye on the white lines, I think that sometimes less is more.

But all in all, it's a very professional and great drawing of yours which I really like.

If this critique helped you in anyway it would mean a lot to me if you could give my gallery a look too ^-^
Shark  Girl