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Game Night With Gainer Girls by GoblinHordeStudios Game Night With Gainer Girls by GoblinHordeStudios
This pic makes me think that its a what if scenario, like what if Vicki never went to school in Ireland and instead went to college with Pip and Sasha. As you can see they haven't been the best influence on Vicki's dieting habits lol. 

A flat color commission from :iconthunderkid92: he wanted a picture of his new character Pip and my Vicki playing video games together, I later added :iconvolkenfox: 's character Sasha into the mix.

Looks like Vicki is getting her butt handed to her in the game, at least she's got those comfy meat pillows to rest on.
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:iconmysteriesvortex:
Greatest strength of this image is how different each character looks in the activities and positions they are drawn. This in itself makes the whole image feel more lively. Background is generic and art technique used does the job fine but nothing that makes it stick out from other drawings done by the artist. Some errors with how the characters are drawn are seen but nothing major. Overall I really enjoy the effort that the artist did with making the image more lively and with more personality to it but I also know that visually he has done better in previous drawings as stuff like lighting/shading and the background don't seem to have the same amount of effort put into it as the characters themselves.
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I like it, the characters are all very expressive and have a lot of "Bounce" to them (pun intended). Despite the fact that this was done with flat colors, each character has a very attractive color scheme sans Vicki (the Blue & Black and the Purple & Tan combos are more appealing than the Red & Green combo, but her fur alone is pretty good). The shading really lacks direction (try thinking about where their light source would be). Vicki and Pip could use a bit more *squish* with their arms on their breasts, more like how Pip's belly has a little *squish* between her breast and leg. I really enjoy the little details like Vicki's hair between her neck and shoulder, or Sasha's pizza and its stretch. I really love this picture, but there are some parts that could use improvement.
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Moqffea Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2018  Professional General Artist
Tini Pink Rose They are beautifulTini Pink Rose 
 Tini Pink Rose                         Tini Pink Rose 
    Pixel Rose Pixel Rose Pixel Rose Pixel Rose Pixel Rose Pixel Rose 
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Kira-The-Fox-1794 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lit!!!

(Also 600th fav. Yeeee!)
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quirkyplans Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely n' they all look like they're havin' a blast too~ Smile|Blush|Tilt|Anime|Eto...? 
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AmatureDuelistYamask Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Your style is actually kind of hard to critique.  I find it much more difficult to critique cartoony styles because I like them so much.  If I were to critique an art piece, I would base it off of things like: color scheme, shading, message, etc..  Cartoon-based styles don't really focus on things like that. They focus on little stories and gaining enjoyment.  I feel the need to ask, why do you want this art piece to be Critiqued?

Note: I'm an idiot, I read "100-Word Minimum" as "100-Word Maximum"
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Mysteriesvortex Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018
I messed on that too.   I would have written more if I had realized it was min and not max.  
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GoblinHordeStudios Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018   Digital Artist
I guess I wanted it critiqued because I haven't really made a flat colored picture like this before, most of my flat color images look more like panels from a comic page instead of being a full picture.   Id like my flat colored pictures to be better and there are things I don't know how to depict as well only using flat colors like I do with a full colored picture.  Like this picture is supposed to be the three girls playing games on a tv in a dark room but how am I supposed to depict light and darkness without using shadows, highlights and gradients. those are challenges that are interesting with flat colors.
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Mysteriesvortex Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2018
Have you considered a cell shaded approach.  Using vicki's red fur as an example you could find two types of colors, one for a lighter red for when the fur is exposed to a light source and a darker red color for when it is not exposed to a light source.  If you're going for a more flat color style of art I don't think you'll need to worry much about gradients of lighting and shading since it can mainly be a binary light/no light colors for characters and environments.
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Oooooookay Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
I'm disappointed. Why aren't Pip and Sasha squashing Vicki between their big bellies?
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black-sunn89 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018
nice girls
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:iconcaseydecker:
CaseyDecker Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
All four furry gals look quite cute and sexy hanging out together for sure, and I am such a sucker for girls in socks as well! :D
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:iconmysteriesvortex:
I think Vicki in this is actually larger than her court of gluttony 5 look.
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Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018
nice one, they look like they're having fun
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TheAmazingCornbot Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018
Yo they on PS4 or Steam? What're they playing?
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GoblinHordeStudios Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2018   Digital Artist
PS4, Probably a game similar to overwatch or siege.
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TheAmazingCornbot Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2018
I see...
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LordStormCaller Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great poses! I love how Vicki's thong is peeking out of her pajama bottoms. :)
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Mysteriesvortex Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018
I like the touch on vicki's hair where most of it is falling where her head is tilted and some of it got caught in between her cheek and shoulder.
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Thunderkid92 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Professional General Artist
I agree it is a nice touch that adds to her look in the picture
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theamazingworldofatt Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
I meant hehe*
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theamazingworldofatt Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Student Traditional Artist
Her cool!:) and also honestly I love PS4
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Mysteriesvortex Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018
Looks like some sort of split time lines like in Legend of Zelda.  I wonder what could have caused Vicki to not move to Ireland.  Picked one less fights than she would have?
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xaviir20 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2018  Student Artist
Cute bellies and having fun together
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