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gears stuck
with ribs
rub shivs
through deer
skulls split
in fifths

dumb hunger
fixed
fox wisps
lure spears
dull spit
of lips

numb lick
of wasp
whips crossed
sips fear
from lost
limb frost

veers sick
and slops
slip-soft
grip near
exhaustion
stops
800 steps
and is it progress
yet?
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StarEclypse Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Professional Artist
I got lost in the rhythm of this piece that I had to read it through again to pay attention to the words
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
that was the intention!

thanks for the support :D
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breathingglassstars Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013   Writer
this has a fucking amazing rhythm
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013   Writer
glad you like it.
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hazeltown Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
pretty words
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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