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sunris’n,
rapt round
and sweet down
eager nape;
soft breeze
keeps those autumns
radiant.

steep drown
surfaces to rub
sun’s leap;
i’m under
mystique,
aquiver.

full beg,
giver of god’s peace;
traipse down
praising vessels.

slow sweep
of pressure:
give, take, release,
but never stop.

sing atop glinting hills,
treasured and lavished,
in desperate emphatics
incite the pierced.

i need
to worship, dogmatic
at your altar; you
are the goddess and i
incense.

burn, grip and tense
as rains kiss and innervate
open plains, in
your name alone
my quench.

isle of want,
sway in time
and spray shoreline
and break the sky
in peals of wonder.

peace be
these seas,
these stars,
this thunder.
upward
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AlterEgo1629 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow this was breathtaking.
Gorgeous.
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2018   Writer
thankya kindly
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DeeryDeerth Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
has a kind of an archaic feel, especially with the first stanza... that's really cool!!

it's a beautiful song of praise
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2018   Writer
when you find the feeling
its hard to feel anything else
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