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 .
 am mssng
somethng
that once was
nstnct;
mperatve,
nborn,
and qute dstnct.

 thnk
that t's shakng me,
and my ablty
to be creatvely
satsfed.


  .
my vsage
n the mrror
shows new lnes,
both wrnkles and planes
unfamlar.

 queston
f  can stll
be a pllar
for famly
or am  destned
to wther?

but why?

dd  msstep
or mscalculate?
my desgns msdrect
and my tme msplace?

s nepttude
the prze
for nadequate pace?

or am  smply
lost n space?


   .
a slver
or shard
of a shmmerng heart
radates.

no.

 wll not be bured.

no nterstellar
confnement
wll nterrupt
my ntentons.

 wll be an ntrepd explorer's
nventon

and always
when least
expected.


 v.
sng, chors!

n fnest ntonaton
rejoce!

my optcs were mscalbrated
prevously,
but now
even eyelds
cannot nterfere
wth my vson.


v.
ths nspraton s nsstently blndng
but all the same
stll consstently deservng fndng.
lately
t seems
there s no  n me.
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dyrwen Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm curious, did you write this, then remove the "I's" or write it and delete your "I's" as you went?

I ask since I tried the other option, of using no words with "I" in it, and it makes it less readable somehow. Nice that the brain reads the I as there anyway sometimes.
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dyrwen Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Spiffy.
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012   Writer
I wrote it without i's, consciously choosing words containing them. It was most fun that way.
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:iconshade-the-echidna911:
This is pure creative genius!
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012   Writer
I appreciate it, thanks!
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:iconprairiedaisy:
prairiedaisy Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012   Writer
ah you are made of so much awesome!
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012   Writer
hahaha you're sweet.

sometimes I'm just :typerhappy:
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Sorelliena Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
erg I was thinking of writing something like this

now I can't because you've done it too well

darn
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012   Writer
I disagree with that. Write it regardless!

<3
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pardonM3 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
nsta-fave, good sr!
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012   Writer
thank ya kndly.

;D
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pardonM3 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
:dance:
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:iconlady-viola:
lady-viola Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012   Writer

you've illustrated the concept perfectly- the lack of i's adding intrigue :)
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:icongliitchlord:
gliitchlord Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012   Writer
Glad you enjoyed it. :D
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lady-viola Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012   Writer
: ) : ) : )
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