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Hey guys, just a quick request for feedback on my latest works:
Winter's Dance
Dancing over ice and snow,
Making our own rhythm and flow.
Letting the sound of silence
Guide this Winter's dance.
A sudden snap and crack echoes.
Our dance forced to a close.
Your hand is ripped away from mine,
Leaving only a black glove behind.
Hurled into a world of chaotic mess
As bubbles dance and coalesce.
Watery white noise fills my ears
Until a scream confirms my fears.
Sinking into a cold watery grave
Beyond where anyone can save.
As icy fire invades my dying lungs,
Bubbles stream past my teeth and tongue.
I'm falling where you can't follow,
Into the abyss and undertow.
White turned blue and now black,
I'm gone and I can't come back.
Staring back up at your crying face
Screaming down from the surface.
I reach out to touch you again,
I'm trying so hard I go insane.
The winter is tearing us apart,
The cold is breaking our hearts.
The water drags me from you
As I fall away into the blue.
Floating in the blue-black abyss,
Thinking of all I will always miss.
Trapped in this rollerc
Nicotine Kiss
I can't help but know you're toxic,
Leaving me broken, twisted and sick.
I can't help the way that I'm addicted,
But I love the way that I'm afflicted.
 
I choke and I cough on your perfume,
Drowning in the feeling of doom.
I choke and cough the lies I hiss,
Left hanging for your addictive kiss.
 
I can't stop my heart feeling so sore
When you leave me wanting more.
I can't stop myself from fading away
Like the sound of all the lies you say.
 
You take my breath out of my chest,
But I still think your torture is the best.
You take me to places that I don't miss,
To leave me hanging for your poison kiss.
 
I can't stop taking your poison,
Breathing it like it's my oxygen.
I can't stop always letting you in,
You drive and calm the beast within.
 
My thoughts of us keep getting bleaker
As my sense of will keeps getting weaker.
My thoughts drag me into the abyss,
Leaving me hanging for your nicotine kiss…

What do you honestly think about them? What do you like about them, and what do you dislike? Should I do more collaborations with visual artists (if you want to collab with me, please feel free to send a note)?
I want to know what you guys think, so please comment with feedback/suggestions

Thanks, 
Jayden
  • Listening to: Turn by The Wombats
  • Reading: This
  • Watching: A friend playing Fortnite
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Hi there, it's me, that stereotypical 18/19 year old emo poet. I can't be bothered to put much effort into writing a decent bio, but anything is better than my last one.

I have been a writer for a few years now. I wrote some experimental "songs" when I was around 15, then started writing poetry and short stories when I was around 16. I joined dA just before I got into writing poetry, when I thought I'd be more into writing short stories (then I got lazy and couldn't be fucked to type up stories).
I wrote about relationships (or crushes), depression, hate, anger, and general cringy pieces of shit that are typical of an angsty teen. My stories always seemed to involve either murder, suicide, or both, and never last more than a page. I don't know what my newer style is, or if I even have a style, since I can barely seem to write anything decent anymore. The few works I manage to get out seem to be going in more of a narrative-poem direction.

If you need someone to talk to, I might be willing to listen, but no promises, I check dA sporadically, and often have moods where I can't stand talking to anyone.
If you're going through tough times however, and no one else will listen, I will reply as soon as I can, with any answers I can think of. I never get annoyed at people that are going through the same kind of mental hell that I can't seem to get out of.

I hope this bio isn't as bad as I think it is, and I hope you enjoy my work, especially some of the cooler new stuff (excuse the pun about the poem I just released).

I'm an asshole, I'm a prick, I'm mopey, but worst of all, I'm a writer.



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Two different people live under my skin,
Trying to balance the conflict within.
I can't keep it together anymore,
I struggle to remember what I'm fighting for.
;)
Hey guys, I know I released a teaser for a new work ages ago and forgot to eventually post it.
Just letting you know that I'm posting it now.
So I hope you enjoy Death's Song
Here's another little hint to an upcoming work ;)


I'm lying on the floor, feeling my life leave me,
Letting Death's song wash away my impurity.
Et Dolor transit, sicut respirare vivos et custodiunt ;)
You take me to places that I don't miss
Leaving me hanging for your nicotine kiss...

;)

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You're almost not a teen any longer.  ;)  :)
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Yeah ahaha
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Thanks for the llama. :D
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:D :D B-Day! :party: :cake: Hope you have a fun one & that this year will be your best yet... :heart:
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:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo: 

It's October 6th which means it's that time of the year again and your special day is here! We hope you have an awesome day with lots of birthday fun, gifts, happiness and most definitely, lots of cake! Here's to another year! 

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