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my third proffesional drawing, while i was preparing for National exam, been working on this one for about 2-3 days, i have used only pencils of HB, 2B, 4B and ereaser. please state your opinion about that drawing, hope you like it. :)
Image details
Image size
1536x2048px 516.3 KB
Make
Nokia
Model
N73
Shutter Speed
1/17 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
320
Date Taken
Sep 26, 2008, 3:29:50 PM
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© 2008 - 2021 gio0989
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gio0989's avatar
thanks for the comments, i will foresee your advice, i have taken that picture by my mobile because my digital camira is taken away. i will try to take better picture ;)
AgnesPterry's avatar
I agree with HMSpeedFreek that the bad camera shot distracts from the loveliness of the final product! Perhaps you could experiment with lighting and flash/non flash? Of course, having a digital camera makes all that so much easier. I have to take a number of pictures myself to find the very best one.

I especially like the shape of the broken vase, the pumpkin, and all the detail work on the folds of the cloth. Also, the edges that are repeated in the pumpkin and bottle are interesting as well.
HMSpeedFreek's avatar
I think you should change it to plain grayscale and not have that weird coloured band across it.

I really like the drawing, very nice shading especially on the bottle :nod: