Hi this is your critique from #Traditional-Media
I think this is really nice, the colors are rich and warm, and I really like the 'box' area, it adds for a very interesting aspect in the composition.
I do feel as thought the left side of the painting is a little too heavy, and to fix this I would simply bring the right side the painting over about 1/4 the the way. I like the right side blank the way it is aside from the top corner, and I would only sugest moving it over slightly because the left is so heavy it makes me wonder why the rest of it is there at all, because im not looking at it. I am glad that you did not over work the left bottom corner, and that most of the detail is near the top of the painting, I think that works very well for it.
over all its really quite nice, i love the flowers and the way the move your eyes though the painting. One thing I am not sure about is if they are holding hands or just standing close to each other, and his hand is blocking hers? I think that area of the image could be clarified a little by working on the hand shape and definition.
all in all its quite lovely