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I Can Still Remember


I have a few scratched memories of our time together
The phone call that ended so suddenly
You smell stepping out of the bathroom
The giggle you made when I said I love you

I can still remember the weekend we slept outside
The empty field in the middle of autumn
Our backs against the green grass
Your smile blends into the red windflowers

I can still remember that I loved you
But I can't remember why
My head is filled with short sounds of your voice
But it's the echoes that drives me crazy
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Image size
800x555px 327.32 KB
Canon EOS 5D
Shutter Speed
1/500 second
Focal Length
200 mm
ISO Speed
Date Taken
Apr 7, 2007, 1:12:55 PM
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269-million's avatar
A beautiful poem, with a beautiful thematic picture. :)
ADIKAY's avatar
Beautiful and emotional , both the view and the description that comes with it! Congrats!
hpmarocsvp's avatar
This looks simply stunning!! Wow!
LadyUnderwood's avatar
I like how the rain makes this photo melancholy in a simple way. :clap: The colors look wonderful against each other, too.
Shadowelve's avatar
Oh wonderful :love: It looks so surreal and nearly like an old oil painting or something... Beautiful shot :clap:
Sounddrive's avatar
This is amazing!
gillianivyart's avatar
This has been featured in my latest journal: [link]
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wilesofstarlight's avatar
Breathtaking. Thank you for gifting the rest of us with your marvelous work. :)
JJDominic's avatar
very impressive !
hot-chokolate's avatar
really like it...
so soft and...remarkable
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Red-Wallflower's avatar
Hi, this lovely work has been featured in my journal :heart:
Noor-al-Haqiqa's avatar
Amazing all of it ~ words and image. Amazing use of colour.
BenoitJWild's avatar
deep and well think
khaaalid-Aldarae's avatar
Gooooooooood ^_^

JKn0w's avatar
The poes goes well with your submitted art. It makes one remember too. Thanks for sharing!
morgie39's avatar
I featured thie gorgeous piece here [link]
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