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Ghostbusters: After The End (Cover/Pitch Image) by Ghostbustersmaniac Ghostbusters: After The End (Cover/Pitch Image) by Ghostbustersmaniac
A novel I made with a friend of mine. This is a story that takes place the month after the events of the new GB movie. Erin would discover that Rowan's bowtie is still on the ground (As shown on this image.) and her accomplices would question why the bowtie is there despite Rowan's defeat. They get soon attacked by the ghost of Rowan's wife, Minora. Her appearance is the rejected female logo ghost that Kevin sketched. However, she has legs, is human-sized, and is insane because she couldn't get over the loss of her husband. You'll see when you read the story. The A.U. Edition contains the previous version with the original GBs. For the version that makes sense, read the Canon Edition.
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:iconalvaxerox:
alvaxerox Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2016
when I look at this, I think of a fan made sequel
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:iconghostbustersmaniac:
Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
If enough money is made from DVD sales, a sequel might come to reality.
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alvaxerox Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2016
I hope so, but there is one thing i don't want if they made a sequel, '' DON'T MAKE THE PEOPLE STOP BELIEVING THAT THERE ARE GHOSTS, MAKING THEM FRAUDS LIKE IN GHOSTBUSTERS 2!!!"
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The-Rebel-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If I may interject? I saw the film, and one, I kinda like the idea of the wife taking the form of the first reject logo. Two, Egon can't be a cyborg, because they don't have the tech for that. Besides, the Ghostbusters are physicists, not robotics experts. Third, if Egon WERE to return it would be as a benevolent specter, who want to help the girls out.
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:iconghostbustersmaniac:
Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
One scrapped version had Egon in perfect living condition. The story is currently being rewritten to fit the reboot's canon better.
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The-Rebel-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just trust me. If Egon is gonna be anything, he should be at the very least, a SPECTER.
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:iconghostbustersmaniac:
Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
The rewritten version will be slightly different. No mentions of the original characters for this one. They're getting their own story soon.
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The-Rebel-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh. Okay. Well, perhaps maybe a cameo by Louis Tully then?
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PL125 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm, I don't really think such an idea would work. Making the villain Rowan's wife sounds interesting, but logically it couldn't happen ONE DAY after the events of the new film and she wouldn't look like the other ghost design Kevin made because Rowan isn't the no ghost logo instantly based on some rumors about the script, and the return of the original Ghostbusters kind of messes up the continuity of this new film and the original and making Egon a reanimated cyborg is ... and forgive me, but extremely wrong. You should work on this story a lot more. I'm sorta working on my own Ghostbusters 2016 series of stories right now, not really in comic form, but just stories for now. 
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Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
I will try to figure out how this all ties in.

The reappearance of the originals goes like:
Peter: Maybe someone can help out.
Erin: Dr. Heiss?
Peter: Nope. It's Peter Venkman.

Storywise, some period of time (unspecified) passed by, and the only relative of Rowan rises to try to end the Ghostbusters once and for all.

The Egon cyborg is concepted because of the death of Harold Ramis.

Minora's dangerous powers would give her the ability to take on the form. She does it the same way that Rowan turns into the real icon ghost.

These concepts are still being worked on, so the story will have some differences between these ideas and the final product.
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PL125 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
hm yeah you're gonna have to do some multiverse thing if you want the originals as they were (all alive) or try to explain in a prologue that the 2016 film takes place in the original universe because the dialogue doesn't really say much. 

Well I can see that with Minora since Rowan is a demon or something elevated to a demonic force and honestly she'll have to take on the form for some reason and the form can't be silly like the one Kevin drew because that was just a joke. 

Yeah ... Egon doesn't need to be a cyborg because that's just a bit of a stretch. Making him a ghost is a better idea.

I understand the story needs to be worked on, but you'll really have to come up with lots of ideas and get rid of some. ... I'm sorry but a cyborg Egon is pretty creepy to me. 
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Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Minora will not appear as some form of siren eye candy. What she wants to accomplish is serious. She will think to herself, "I may not like this form, but fuck it."

More concepts will be thought of with some other people. I didn't say I would do this alone.

The story will say that Peter played up a publicity stunt to fool everyone that he was Dr. Heiss. Possible callback to Aladdin. Ray didn't tell Erin anything about him while Rowan was attacking. But he said "I ain't afraid of no ghosts" so that's the clue that he IS Ray. The Winston cameo would be worked on as we see new content. So, it's not going to be worked on right away. It would start development right after we figure out all every plot detail we could put in this.
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PL125 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
If she doesn't like it, than why does she choose it? It's not like she's forced to like Gozer if she is powerful enough to chose any form. 

Well good luck. Hopefully someone can help you with it. I would like to help, but the story needs to be reworked in my view. I respect it, don't get me wrong, and likely I'll say it's good, but you need to see the film first and try reading the books they made and other GB references to make the story better. 

Uhm ... you need to think it through believe me.
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Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
The female breasted ghost is the form she picks because it's the closest resemblance to her.

I have more open spots for co-creators, so I got no problem with you helpin' out.
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:iconpl125:
PL125 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I would, but I rather just be an editor or just give feedback on it to change. 
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:iconghostbustersmaniac:
Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Welcome aboard! Private messages will be sent regarding possible pages to describe and what to draw on it.
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
How about this? A female magician turns the ghostbusters members into teenagers so they can bust ghosts again. I know it's crappy and a horrible idea. 
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PL125 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
... you are strange ... I like you. 
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Really. :) 
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:iconpl125:
PL125 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, though your reason to make them teens is weird, but funny.
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I don't know how to say this but thank you. 
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Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Works for a different story, honestly.
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Ok then.

Peter Venkman III: and what else do we want to call? Ghostbusters? To me, we are.
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
And younger versions of the original Ghostbusters I'm planning. 
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Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Won't stop you there :P
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Image by GBMelendez23k   You're going to love this. Image by GBMelendez23k  Here they are and their ecto-1. 
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Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
Cool stuff, dude. I'll be posting character designs for the reappearing original cast and Minora sometime soon.
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
You know I'm writing a story which features the young Ghostbusters like in the picture I've showed you. 
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:icongbmelendez23k:
GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Nice, I'm looking forward to this. 
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Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
The Young Ghostbusters by GBMelendez23k   I wrote the backstory for them. 
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Ghostbustersmaniac Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Filmographer
The concepts I have now could use some work. If you want to help out, that would be nice. I never said I would do this alone ;)
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GBMelendez23k Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Sweet, we should collaborate. 
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