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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 32

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 32

Chapter 32: A Life is Better Together Author's Note: okay! This is it! After months of slaving over this story, it's going in the history books! That's right, this is the final chapter! How will I end the tale that mashed up one of my favorite cartoons with one of my favorite movies? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Two weeks after Mako had talked with Hiroshi Sato, dozens upon dozens of kids, teenagers, and even some adults were gathered at Gommu’s Candy Shop, along with other candy and grocery stores throughout Republic City. And every single patron was clamoring for Candyman Bumi’s Three-Course Dinner Chewing Gum. It wasn’t long before a location ran out of its supply, and the owners had to order more. At the Bumi Chocolate Factory, phones were ringing off the hook, as Oompa-Loompas answered the calls and filled out invoice after invoice of the new chewing gum. Everyone in Republic City was screaming for more

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 31

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 31

Chapter 31: Cultivating Problems & Dreams Author's Note: okay...I'm embarrassed. I've let you guys down by not updating this story regularly like I used to. But by hook or by crook, I will finish it! I've always finished what I started, and I'm not about to start now! When we last left off, Avatar Korra had once again sampled the three-course dinner chewing gum, which now worked perfectly! But now, Mako is about to learn that not everything Candyman Bumi touches turns to gold... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It wasn’t long before Korra had to return home, as she had been away from the South Pole for over two months. Mako and Keira were sorry to see the Avatar go, but Korra assured them she would be back soon. Mako had actually offered Korra a chance to live on the factory grounds with him and Keira, knowing that Bumi wouldn’t mind. The Avatar was flattered by the offer, but wanted to ask her parents first, and

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 30

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 30

Chapter 30: Coming Full Circle Author's Note: so after many months apart, Mako and Korra are now together again, Keira is eager to see her new friend again, and the young Avatar is about exorcise some demons from the first factory tour... ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- While they waited for Keira to return from school and her paper route, Mako showed Korra more changes that had been made to the factory since the first tour. There were new candies in the Chocolate Room, and the boat ride aboard the S.S. Bumitania had completely changed. Now when they went through the tunnel, instead of the creepy scenes, there was a kaleidoscope of colors that dazzled the eye. Mako also had the boat stop at the rooms it had passed during the first tour. Most of them were just storage rooms like the one with hair cream, however. For Korra, it was incredible to see how much had changed in the factory, and how much hadn’t changed

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 29

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 29

Chapter 29: Welcoming Back Korra Author's Note: sorry for another long delay, gentle readers! I'm just so frusterated with this COVID-19 pandemic! I'm still working like a dog, and now my summer is pretty much dead with NASCAR not coming to Watkins Glen this year! But enough with my delusional ranting; I always finish what I start, and this story is no exception! It took me a while, but here is some more of my story, along with some more Makorra action! ==================================================================== Finally, two weeks after the factory tour, Bumi released an official statement to the public and the press. Among its key points was the explanation for the golden tickets, and how one young man would inherit the Bumi Chocolate Factory after Bumi himself had passed on. The statement also explained why Mako was chosen, claiming he was a “bright, honest, and wholesome young man” and that Bumi could “trust Mako to take my factory far into a bright and successful

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 28

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 28

Chapter 28: BUSTED!! Author's Note: last time, Lin Beifong, aka "Rocksworth", managed to fool Asami Sato into giving her all of the heiress' photos and notes of the interiors of Bumi's Chocolate Factory. Now, Miss Sato is in for a very unpleasant surprise! Two days after her meeting with “Rocksworth”, Asami Sato was waiting outside the gates to the Bumi Chocolate Factory. It was a cool and overcast morning, and the heiress was waiting for someone to let her inside. The day before, Asami had received a phone call from Bumi at the Future Industries factory. He was quite agitated at her actions, but realizing he was in an almost no-

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory Ch. 27

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory Ch. 27

Chapter 27: Infiltration Author's Note: last time, Bumi recieved a threatening letter from Asami, who has sworn retribution against the Candyman! But Bumi has an ace up his sleeve, in the form of "Rocksworth"... It was a bustling workday at Future Industries. But strangely, the new company chairwoman wasn’t relaxing in her office and counting up the money. She was hard at work, trying to think of new ways to get back at Candyman Bumi. Asami was still sour about her trip down the garbage chute, along with not being able to get a duck-goose that laid golden chocolate eggs. But what really stuck in her craw was that she had lost her Ever

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 26

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 26

Chapter 26: A Promise and a Threat Author's Note: for the love of Mankind, where have I been?! To all those who have been awaiting an update since Christmas, I apologize. Many things conspired against me. First there was my laziness, then a bit of writer's block. But the biggest pain in the derriere was that the motherboard in my computer finally fizzled out after ten years! I was sucked into a dimension of pissed off I have never been before in my life! Thankfully, an IT guy at a local computer repair shop was able to save all my data! And after months of research and second guessing, I pulled the trigger on buying a new computer. And it fi

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 25

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 25

Chapter 25: The New Normal Author's Note: despite being reassured that she would be completely restored, it must be strange for Korra's parents seeing that their daughter is still somewhat blue all over...will she finally get back to normal? The rest of the day was spent showing Korra's parents around the chocolate factory. She, along with Bumi and Mako, took Tonraq and Senna to all the rooms they visited, and gave commentary to what had happened in each room. Both Korra and Mako were relieved when they took the Bumi-vator in turns to all the rooms. They didn't want Tonraq and Senna to be terrorized by the boat trip. The Avatar's parents wer

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 24

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 24

Chapter 24: Meet The Parents Author's Note: ah, the day that Mako has been dreading has finally arrived! He now has to explain to Korra's parents exactly what happened to their daughter! The following morning, Mako briefly left the factory so he could get to a wire office and send a message to Korra's parents about her incident. Although he could not see or hear them, when the operator relayed the reply message, Mako could tell that both Korra's mother and father were deeply concerned. All Mako could say back was that they should both come to Republic City as quickly as they could. Afterwards, Mako headed back to the factory, but he didn't e

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 23

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 23

Chapter 23: A Changed Avatar Author's Note: last time, Mako had the chance to fully explain to Keira about what had happened in the Bumi Factory during the tour. Now, get ready for some more Makorra sweetness! Korra could hear faint voices as she slept. She wasn't sure who the voices belonged to, but she knew that whoever they were, they were talking about her. Korra felt embarrassed again as she didn't want anybody to see her like this; her only hope was that she was just imagining the voices. Almost since she passed out, Korra kept having the last minutes spent in the Inventing Room run through her head over and over. The sight of looking
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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 32

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The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 32

Chapter 32: A Life is Better Together Author's Note: okay! This is it! After months of slaving over this story, it's going in the history books! That's right, this is the final chapter! How will I end the tale that mashed up one of my favorite cartoons with one of my favorite movies? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Two weeks after Mako had talked with Hiroshi Sato, dozens upon dozens of kids, teenagers, and even some adults were gathered at Gommu’s Candy Shop, along with other candy and grocery stores throughout Republic City. And every single patron was clamoring for Candyman Bumi’s Three-Course Dinner Chewing Gum. It wasn’t long before a location ran out of its supply, and the owners had to order more. At the Bumi Chocolate Factory, phones were ringing off the hook, as Oompa-Loompas answered the calls and filled out invoice after invoice of the new chewing gum. Everyone in Republic City was screaming for more

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 31

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 31

Chapter 31: Cultivating Problems & Dreams Author's Note: okay...I'm embarrassed. I've let you guys down by not updating this story regularly like I used to. But by hook or by crook, I will finish it! I've always finished what I started, and I'm not about to start now! When we last left off, Avatar Korra had once again sampled the three-course dinner chewing gum, which now worked perfectly! But now, Mako is about to learn that not everything Candyman Bumi touches turns to gold... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- It wasn’t long before Korra had to return home, as she had been away from the South Pole for over two months. Mako and Keira were sorry to see the Avatar go, but Korra assured them she would be back soon. Mako had actually offered Korra a chance to live on the factory grounds with him and Keira, knowing that Bumi wouldn’t mind. The Avatar was flattered by the offer, but wanted to ask her parents first, and

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 30

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 30

Chapter 30: Coming Full Circle Author's Note: so after many months apart, Mako and Korra are now together again, Keira is eager to see her new friend again, and the young Avatar is about exorcise some demons from the first factory tour... ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- While they waited for Keira to return from school and her paper route, Mako showed Korra more changes that had been made to the factory since the first tour. There were new candies in the Chocolate Room, and the boat ride aboard the S.S. Bumitania had completely changed. Now when they went through the tunnel, instead of the creepy scenes, there was a kaleidoscope of colors that dazzled the eye. Mako also had the boat stop at the rooms it had passed during the first tour. Most of them were just storage rooms like the one with hair cream, however. For Korra, it was incredible to see how much had changed in the factory, and how much hadn’t changed

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 29

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 29

Chapter 29: Welcoming Back Korra Author's Note: sorry for another long delay, gentle readers! I'm just so frusterated with this COVID-19 pandemic! I'm still working like a dog, and now my summer is pretty much dead with NASCAR not coming to Watkins Glen this year! But enough with my delusional ranting; I always finish what I start, and this story is no exception! It took me a while, but here is some more of my story, along with some more Makorra action! ==================================================================== Finally, two weeks after the factory tour, Bumi released an official statement to the public and the press. Among its key points was the explanation for the golden tickets, and how one young man would inherit the Bumi Chocolate Factory after Bumi himself had passed on. The statement also explained why Mako was chosen, claiming he was a “bright, honest, and wholesome young man” and that Bumi could “trust Mako to take my factory far into a bright and successful

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 28

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 28

Chapter 28: BUSTED!! Author's Note: last time, Lin Beifong, aka "Rocksworth", managed to fool Asami Sato into giving her all of the heiress' photos and notes of the interiors of Bumi's Chocolate Factory. Now, Miss Sato is in for a very unpleasant surprise! Two days after her meeting with “Rocksworth”, Asami Sato was waiting outside the gates to the Bumi Chocolate Factory. It was a cool and overcast morning, and the heiress was waiting for someone to let her inside. The day before, Asami had received a phone call from Bumi at the Future Industries factory. He was quite agitated at her actions, but realizing he was in an almost no-

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory Ch. 27

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory Ch. 27

Chapter 27: Infiltration Author's Note: last time, Bumi recieved a threatening letter from Asami, who has sworn retribution against the Candyman! But Bumi has an ace up his sleeve, in the form of "Rocksworth"... It was a bustling workday at Future Industries. But strangely, the new company chairwoman wasn’t relaxing in her office and counting up the money. She was hard at work, trying to think of new ways to get back at Candyman Bumi. Asami was still sour about her trip down the garbage chute, along with not being able to get a duck-goose that laid golden chocolate eggs. But what really stuck in her craw was that she had lost her Ever

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 26

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 26

Chapter 26: A Promise and a Threat Author's Note: for the love of Mankind, where have I been?! To all those who have been awaiting an update since Christmas, I apologize. Many things conspired against me. First there was my laziness, then a bit of writer's block. But the biggest pain in the derriere was that the motherboard in my computer finally fizzled out after ten years! I was sucked into a dimension of pissed off I have never been before in my life! Thankfully, an IT guy at a local computer repair shop was able to save all my data! And after months of research and second guessing, I pulled the trigger on buying a new computer. And it fi

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 25

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 25

Chapter 25: The New Normal Author's Note: despite being reassured that she would be completely restored, it must be strange for Korra's parents seeing that their daughter is still somewhat blue all over...will she finally get back to normal? The rest of the day was spent showing Korra's parents around the chocolate factory. She, along with Bumi and Mako, took Tonraq and Senna to all the rooms they visited, and gave commentary to what had happened in each room. Both Korra and Mako were relieved when they took the Bumi-vator in turns to all the rooms. They didn't want Tonraq and Senna to be terrorized by the boat trip. The Avatar's parents wer

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 24

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 24

Chapter 24: Meet The Parents Author's Note: ah, the day that Mako has been dreading has finally arrived! He now has to explain to Korra's parents exactly what happened to their daughter! The following morning, Mako briefly left the factory so he could get to a wire office and send a message to Korra's parents about her incident. Although he could not see or hear them, when the operator relayed the reply message, Mako could tell that both Korra's mother and father were deeply concerned. All Mako could say back was that they should both come to Republic City as quickly as they could. Afterwards, Mako headed back to the factory, but he didn't e

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 23

T

The Legend of The Chocolate Factory, Ch. 23

Chapter 23: A Changed Avatar Author's Note: last time, Mako had the chance to fully explain to Keira about what had happened in the Bumi Factory during the tour. Now, get ready for some more Makorra sweetness! Korra could hear faint voices as she slept. She wasn't sure who the voices belonged to, but she knew that whoever they were, they were talking about her. Korra felt embarrassed again as she didn't want anybody to see her like this; her only hope was that she was just imagining the voices. Almost since she passed out, Korra kept having the last minutes spent in the Inventing Room run through her head over and over. The sight of looking
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