Yeah! I think this turned out really nicely. Did you have trouble with the lines? I think they look good, but I don't know if it was the process rather than the results that you had issue with. Your colour choices work nicely too; I like the differing line colours producing the look of different line weights and shadows.
Thanks! ^^ I think some of the lines were a bit fiddly, but not as much as the last time I did something like this (had to finish the sketch in Photoshop due to tablet weirdness that went away after re-opening Paint, though).