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Trunks' Date, ch 7, page 203 by genaminna Trunks' Date, ch 7, page 203 by genaminna
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I dunno if I should feel sadder for Goten, Bra or Paresu D:
(Get your own 'Manga-flower-generator' for only 3 easy payments of 33.99!) :)

Something with Bra's face in the 3rd-to-last panel looks really off to me... but I couldn't figure out what it was. :\
And, guys... it's always nice to give out compliments, but... pointing out the wrong things are as much of a help too.... I'll never get any better if I don't know what's wrong...:heart:...k? :)

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Summary from my site: "This is my ooollllddd DBZ fanmanga that I began while I was still in high school... heck, when I was a *freshman* in high school (1999-2000 @_@). Looking back on it now, I realize how crappy it was, but at the same time, I realize what natural flowing of panels I used to have!! (lol) I still love it. ^_^ Maybe it's just because I drew and spent so many years on it? Or, that I still love DBZ... yeah, probably why. =P I'm sorry if my craptacular art in chapter one annoys you... it bothers the heck outta me, so I can understand, haha!
I hope you can still find something you like in it, anyway! ^__^"
From now on, these are pages from the present times... :)
Traditionally inked, with Digital screentones... the inking takes a lot longer than the screentones, so that's why it's still in the 'traditional' category. =P
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:iconterolie:
Terolie Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Student Artist
Oh my god! your lips are so beautiful but at the same time they annoy the shit outta me o.o im really confused why though... love your style though...
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genaminna Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
rofl! :giggle: Couldn't tell you...

Thanks tho! ^^ lol
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Terolie Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Student Artist
no problem^^
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mariabelenzambrano Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007
awwwwww she lookz so sad :(, but the drawing is good yea!
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genaminna Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
heheh, yeah...XD but thank you! :aww: :hug:
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xomisskittyox Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007
you must think im stupid or something but whats a 'Manga-flower-generator' ???
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
lmao! :lmao: Don't owwry, I don't think you're stupid, lmao.
It's kind of an inside joke thing between me and *Graelyn-chan about how, in mangas, there are always random flowers sprouting up and floating around in the panels (usually during 'emotional' scenes :giggle: ), so we were like, there's gotta be some kinda machine or something putting the flowers like that automatically :giggle:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2007  Professional Traditional Artist
*worry
lol XD
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xomisskittyox Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2007
lol okidoke!
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Velasa Featured By Owner May 3, 2006   Traditional Artist
Third to last? her face isn't showing there. But in the third pannel she's got the problem of the bottom of the facial features being way too far down and taking away her chin. Her lips feel too big too. Some of it's nice, but some of the faces just feel puffy (Goten in profile) like the way younger kids are, not like young adults. I like the first pic of Bra though, she's really quite lovley.
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genaminna Featured By Owner May 6, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
ohhhh XD well, when I said 'third-to-last' panel I was counting the 'panels' with the words in them too (the last two with the flowers in them but don't have much else in them (at the bottom)) but thanks for the advice on the urm, puffiness XD and the chin thing lmao. I told you I'm bad with giving people chins...:blush:
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ChickenFingers Featured By Owner May 1, 2006
No, I like her expression there. It's great : D~!! It's kinda dazed-lookin', like she's deep in thought. Don't worry, it's fine.
Oh, my. No one likes a hypocrite ): m~ Poor Braaa
I don't feel very sorry for Paresu. Does that make me a butt? X D
Anyhow, I think more of the problem is Goten's face in panel two. It's a little..weird and chubby-lookin'. I don't know what exactly it is, though. *furrowz brow* >3<
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genaminna Featured By Owner May 7, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
(btw, it's okay that you don't feel sorry for Paresu ;D XD) :giggle:
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genaminna Featured By Owner May 2, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
lol it's okai, thanks for making me take notice of its :D :hug: thanks for liking the Bra panel too...^^; and nope, being a hypocrite ish not very good ...D:
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SonLuna Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2006
Amazing.. :)
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genaminna Featured By Owner May 2, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
:worship: thanks a lot...
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SonLuna Featured By Owner May 2, 2006
:hug:
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MiraiBrianne Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006  Hobbyist Artist
i just love how u do the eyes!!!
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genaminna Featured By Owner May 2, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
aww, thanks...!! :heart: :hug:
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Nine-Tailed-Fox Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Artist
i think its the eyes. you always draw so much detail in them, but in that panel they have little/no detail. thas all i can think of though...
great job none the less! :clap:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
well, it was more of the positioning of the eyes, rather than what was in them that I thought they looked funny...XD but thanks anyhow :D :) :hug:
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Serielle Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
woooo! Awesome update! ^^ Poor Bra! T_T
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
yeah, although in a way, I feel badder for Goten...^^; (But I guess it's because I know the reason why they broke up and no one else does...)XD
thank you :) :hug:
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Serielle Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
your very welcome! ^^
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sora26 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006
Aw I love this one!! Bra looks so beautiful! Especially in that last panel. :aww: Excellent work!!
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
:glomp: thank youuuu~ :blowkiss: (screwed up on her eye though...hehe :giggle: ^^; )
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MAQ3 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow:Wow Gena Your are so good at doing comic strips I really admire you for your hard work..Good job girl :hug: :D
KEEP IT UP!!!!!! :w00t: :w00t!:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
:blush: thanks... although I do need to get even better if I want to do this as a profession...I'm...slowly getting there lol...:hug: thanks :heart: :)
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MAQ3 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
n/p girl!! ^_^ :hug:
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dragonzmoon Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006
Aww.. poor Bra!! :(

I love how she looks in the bottom frame.. something about her eyes.. :D Yeah, that third panel.. Hate me but, she looks kinda like Mary-Kate n' Ashley! :giggle: :p :sprint:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
ROFL, what?!! Oh nooooo XDDD :faint: lol ^^; but um... thanks... o_O lmao XD :rofl:
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dragonzmoon Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006
:giggle: Well.. not that much.. :invisible: but you're very welcome! ;)
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Gosha-Chan Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow your doing so good on this!!! wow page 203!!! :wow: lol thats amazing!!! I was going to start my own doujinshi thing but i...i lost the inspiration rather quickly. Man i love how you draw!! its so realsitic yet then its not! i loves it :heart: grea work!! Oh and about Bra in the 3rd panel. I think it could be her eye thats a bit off her left eye. I dunno, i had to take a really close look to see it mind. =D :hug:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
man, I would love to see how you would do a doujinshi D: D:!!! (hinthint: you should still try to do it ^^; ) :hug: yeah, and everyone seems to think it's the eye too, so I'll look more carefull where I put them next time lol ^^; thanks for liking how I draw :blushes: :love: :hug:
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Yun-kun Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006
awwwww *saddy sad*
I shall feel the saddest for Vegeta...cause he didn't have a party-haz for the 'First Fight'-thing ;3 <3
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
:lmao: yeah, he never can get a break, can he? XD mabbie later
lol thanks :hug:
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scuzme Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006
im not very good at pointing out things that are wrong unless they are painfully obvious ^^; so i'll stick to buttering you up for now :D
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
rofl, I'll bring the :toast: :)
thanks :D :hug:
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scuzme Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006
:love: haha
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SpazzyMcMazzy Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006
Hm, I think it's the eyes on Bra's face that are wrong in that panel. But hey - it's still good!

THe flowers are very pretty ^^
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
yeah I think it is the eyes too ^^; thanks for liking the flowers~ :hug:
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NiMikala Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006
This page is quite the beautiful one :heart: I didn't really notice anything wrong with Bra's face until I read what you had to say about it. o_O Maybe the tip of the nose is a bit too high for the type of angle her face is at? I'm not really too sure I was never good at pointing out such things D: Anyway I still say this is all beautifully drawn and a def +fav :heart: :boogie:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
yayyy! ^o^ :kiss: thanks for the favXD
and I have to look more carefully for the things that you mentioned (about the nose angle) XD thanks! :hug:
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ArtisticParadigm Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think the left eye (3rd panel) of bra is a bit too close to the nose. perhaps that's why it looks off to ya ^^

looks great overall =D
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
hmm, I think your're very right (on the eye thing) :) thanks for telling me! I knew it looked a little funny :giggle: but i couldnt change it after it was already inked in.....XD thanks! :hug: :hug:
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ArtisticParadigm Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol yea...I know what you mean (about changing something after being inked XD)

you're welcome!! :glomp:
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lauraneato Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006
So much Goten/Bra D: Half the story so far is Goten/Bra. Whatever happened to the whole idea of Trunks' Date : /.... and perhaps maybe a hint of TP : /
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
it's almost doooooooneeeeeeee XD (The Goten/Bra stuff) it *does* relate to the Trunks and Pan business... just hold on, sorrie, lol...^^; (next scene, it will relate more to them, I promise)
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Graelyn-chan Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006  Student General Artist
*makes her down payment* YES! The flower generated! *dances in the flowers* And I feel bad for....well...i feel bad for a lot of characters at this point.
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genaminna Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006  Professional Traditional Artist
hehe *puts your flower generator in layaway*
Yeah, there's many others... Marron, Trunks, Chichi... >_>;;; lol... someone else will be next ^_~ (next scene lol) I'm so torturous...:faint: thanks for the comment :heart:
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