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We will all reach a day
when there is nothing left to say
No more tears to cry;
no more pillows to dry.
Where we can only feel and be love.

When I look outside in the daytime's spring,
I do not see the Earth as a dismal thing
The love we knew of our fellows past
Has come to bare us with each wind's cast

If Heaven gained an angel, then we would surely know
By noticing the treetops have gained a little glow
And the sky seeming just a little more blue
And the sunsets seeming just a little more new

For it is not that someone 'leaves' when they pass in our time,
But the love that they gave us 'comes united with thine.
I just felt like I had to.
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dragonzmoon Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
Aww..that's sweet. Very nice~
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genaminna Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thank ya ; ) :hug:
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dragonzmoon Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2008
You're welcome! :hug:
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks :aww: <3
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beyrob Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2008
wow this is really touching, it makes me smile when I think of the people I've lost. Thank you.
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genaminna Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
np :3 Glad it could give you a smile :D
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:iconbeyrob:
beyrob Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008
:hug: ^^
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NansJns Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice!

*~*Nans*~*
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks! :aww:
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:iconnansjns:
NansJns Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :)
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IijumiSoukai Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2008
I could feel part of your soul in those words, yet I think you held back a little.

Good job.
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks :]
yeah, I'm not so good with expressing myself through words alone, I suppose X 3~
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:iconvalese:
Valese Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww It's so beautiful *-*
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
:hug: :]
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:iconvalese:
Valese Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^__^ :hug:
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:iconterasiren:
TeraSiren Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2008
beautiful. Nuff said...
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks... ^^
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:icontsukishade:
TsukiShade Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
This beautiful poem :love: I like me this >^w^<
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
^o^ thank you~! :hug::hug::love:
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Th3Brittni Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Student General Artist
nice poem
love the theme of it =D
the "thine" at the end sorta throws me off though XD
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
lmao, I couldn't think of another rhyming word that went with it XDD (and it was the first thing that came to mind lol)
lol, thanks though. :hug: XD
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Th3Brittni Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Student General Artist
haha :lmao:
no problem
:hug: =D
i figured that's what happened :XD:
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
:giggle:
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Katiria-the-Cat Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice Gena ;)
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you :hug: : D~ :heart: <3
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Katiria-the-Cat Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
You should write more poems :3
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
hehe, maybe ^^; :hug:
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xomisskittyox Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
its so beautiful :tears:
f9or me that has to be the best poem ever and im not just saying it!!!!!!
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
:love::hug: thanks, girl...:heart:
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:iconjennoasis:
Jennoasis Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
Wow I really like that. You're so cool :XD:
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
lol :XD: aw, thanks XD :hug:
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:iconjennoasis:
Jennoasis Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008
Of course.
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:iconredpyrocat:
redpyrocat Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Student General Artist
this is really good =3
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks a lot :hug: X3
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Jenca Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
That's very pretty.
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
:3 :hug: :love:
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:iconjenca:
Jenca Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: :hug: :D
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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
An excellent poem
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
ty :love: :hug:
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