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I still might change stuff slightly before I get it printed...
@_@
There are certain things you don't say in public. :XD:

(There's something else I wanted to say... but I forgot. ^^; ) X O *remembers later* Oh yeah! XD I forgot to add in Teri's tones on her dress, lol... but I guess it's okay for this page ^^ (too many tones already?) ^^ ;

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"My Sweet Indulgence" story, art and all characters included are © Rejena Smiley
(Which is me!) ^^
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:icondimitriskats:
dimitriskats Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
First class! All chapters!
Congratulations :)
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks lol
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Megatopsy Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008
Liking it so far :D She's totally mean though, lol! I wonder why......? There MUST be a reason behind it *thinks about it*
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
hohoho, no spoilers from me, at least! :heart: :giggle: ^.^ Glad you liked it! : DDD
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Megatopsy Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008
Aww, that' cool ^^ Can't wait to read more~!
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
:D :D
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dragonzmoon Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2008
Nice movement in the top left panel! :D So far so good! :heart:
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks, gal! :hug: :D :heart:
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:icondragonzmoon:
dragonzmoon Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2008
You're welcome! :hug: :heart:
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IijumiSoukai Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2008
Awesome
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
CX thank you...:heart::heart: ^_^
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Vravage Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2008
Beautiful...
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
Late reply ^^; Thanks!
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Vravage Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008
:)
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NansJns Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Great beginning! I was just starting to think on the previous page that Teri needed a quick butt-kick, and this page starts with just that! Well done! :clap: :D The artwork is really good, too!

*~*Nans*~*
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:iconhdub7:
hdub7 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2008  Professional Artist
Great figure work on this page. :)
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks a lot! :D :hug: :heart:
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:iconyoshi23:
Yoshi23 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
oooo biATch slap >.< :rofl: hahaha the guys in the back... :laughing: this is yet another wonderful page! :clap:
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
*late reply* :XD: Why, thank you! :glomp::hug:
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:iconyoshi23:
Yoshi23 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2008
hahaha :giggle: you're welcome :hug:
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POE1 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
No comment, well, other than I like a nice cushy bum. :blush:
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
haha, yeah, I know some guys like that sort of thing :XD:
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SRHtheHedgehog Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008
I think the tones look fine! If you need some help on deciding, the best help you can find is just looking in published manga for reference. (That's what I do, lol) It really helps me with figuring out layouts and stuff, so screentones would be much the same way. Remember, don't go too psyco on the screentones on regular pages xD It's one thing if it's only every once in a while, but my goodness are you detailed! I don't know how you even have the patience to do all that 8D
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genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
lol XD I dunno sometimes, either ^^; maybe I do need to back off some. Perhaps I should look at some examples of how much others tone; I just don't want to become obsessed with it, I guess~ :0 (like I'm already not? pft...)
thanks, dear~ :heart::blowkiss::aww:
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SRHtheHedgehog Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
No problem! I have problems with layouts (like I tend to not put in enough panels), so I look to the professionals for reference xD I figured that screentones shouldn't be much different xDD
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genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
hehe, I see, I see X33 I try to find the reasons 'why' they do the things they do, but it's only a guess for the most part, or rather, hella hard to figure it out, lol...:shrug: (maybe I'm complicating it too much tho!) ^^;
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SRHtheHedgehog Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
Yeah, except there are some things that I still don't understand, like clothing folds xDDD I'm still completely winging it on those!
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
lols XDD

well a way I like to describe it to myself is to show 'where the energy is pointing/flowing', if that makes any sense, lol.
for example, when your hand/arm is raised, it seems the folds are generally toward that direction. but there's more things to consider about it, of course, lol ^^; but learning anatomy has a lot to do with it, I think >_> .....:crazy: too many details! >O< :faint:
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SRHtheHedgehog Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
Well, when I think about it, I probably know more than I give myself credit for xD Like your shirt is shaped to how your body is in its normal stance, and when you raise your arm, it scrunches up on top of the shoulder, while when your arm is down, it scrunches up at the armpit. If that makes any sense 8D
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genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
yes, it makes sense, hehe :love:
and sometimes things are easier when you *don't* think about them too much and just do what you want, lol ^^;
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Vegetasotherwife Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008
Okay. My last comment about smacking her...I seriously said that before I even knew what was going to happen on this next page :rofl:
Aw sweetie your butt is not huge don't listen to her! D:
This is why I'm glad I have a brother :3
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
lmao, lucky you then XDDD :m
tho my sisters aren't that bad to say it in public :XD:

lmao, that's so funny about the slapping thing XDD
haha, coincidence, or...? :rofl:
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Spiritstalker Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008
Aww... Poor Ki. Everyone's staring at her booty. :laughing:

I think I've said this, but I luffv how you draw their bangs. :nod: Super-spiffy.
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genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks~ :love: :blush:
agh, sometimes it gets annoying rofl, so I'm thinking, maybe it's a hint to myself to work on other things , but I dunno~ thank you again :hug: ^^
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genaminna Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
*looks back on this comment* Wow, I can't believe I said that D:
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s-blue-faerie Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008  Student General Artist
lmao that is the worst thing to say about anyone, I would do the same thing to her if she was real :D
good job, continue... :hug:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
hehe, yup, I will~ :hug: thanks for reading this far
I really wouldn't want someone to say that about me XD and in public, no less, lol
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s-blue-faerie Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Student General Artist
your welcome :hug: I love reading your comics :) lol
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
hehe X33 aw :blush: thanks...:love:!!
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Sipioc Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008
Nice
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thank ya ^^ : D~
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:iconyasumeru:
Yasumeru Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008
Hahaha, this is so funny xDD. I love the way you draw their expressions.
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks, they were fun to do ^^ hehe :hug: :thanks:
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RedneckOtaku Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008  Student General Artist
Wow... I love it so far... love the sister-drama... lolXD
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
heheh XDD wahoo! :w00t:
thanks a lot, bud~ :hug:
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Jenca Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Keri makes me laugh! This is such a good comic!
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
hehe, thanks, I'm glad you like it...^^ :hug:!!
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Jenca Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, keep up the good work! :hug: :giggle:
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:icongenaminna:
genaminna Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
I'll try! hehe :giggle::hug: ^_^
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Kaiju-Borru-Zetto Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
O_o ouch D:
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