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Read the full 16-page story here!

READ FROM RIGHT-TO-LEFT!!

This was my contest entry for the Comic Zenon "Silent Comic" contest. The theme was a "love letter."
I didn't win, but it's still cool to see everyone's entries on their site!
No dialogue, haha. :) Hope you guys enjoy it! :heart:
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NansJns Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great art, good comic; but who was that other girl he was with?  A sister?  The fact he took her over to the young lady's house strongly indicates she wasn't another girlfriend.
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genaminna Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes, this is why I need to work on my visual storytelling...
Well, the story is that they are all friends, and were going to hang out together. But the main chara noticed that they were being too close/touchy-feely when she wasn't (supposedly) looking... so yeah.
But thanks for liking the rest! c: (despite the confusing aspects, haha)
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NansJns Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, now I see.  Maybe if you had included a few shots of the whole group hanging out, it would've helped.  If nothing else, this was a learning experience, right?  :)  Practice makes perfect.

You're welcome! :)
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genaminna Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Ah, yeah. I tried to show them hanging out together like on page 3... but I can see why it'd still be confusing... lol.
It was a great learning experience though!
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NansJns Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe I didn't look closely enough at page 3; either way, you learned something, and that's what counts! :)
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genaminna Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Yup :)
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BekaDavisStudios Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
O_O Just when I thought your work couldn't get any more beautiful... those backgrounds alone... just... :faint:
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genaminna Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Aw, wow, Beka >< Thank you so much!!~:heart:
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