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Procastination~
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Artist // Hobbyist // Traditional Art
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Favourite genre of music: Melodic Metalcore
Favourite style of art: Anime
Personal Quote: Never give up the things that make you smile~ :]]

Favourite Visual Artist
Hino Matsuri~! <3
Favourite Movies
Resident Evil (all), Hellboy, Corpse Bride, I Am Legend, Constantine, Underworld, Princess Mononoke
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
A7X, CKY, Killswitch Engage, All That Remains, In Fear&Faith, A Day to Remember
Favourite Books
Forest of Hands and Teeth Triology; The Hollow Kingdom Triology; The Dark Angel Triology
Favourite Writers
Samuel O; Carrie Ryan
Favourite Games
Left4Dead, Kingdom Hearts, Raving Rabbits, God of War
Favourite Gaming Platform
Xbox 360, PS2
Other Interests
XC, Track

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Comments

:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

When I look at this, my eyes are directly draw to her face.
Her eyes are very lively, they seem to hold a steady gaze.
Her hair is nicely drawn and shaded, I really like it~
I do think though, you need to work a bit more with the angles of the nose and mouth... you'd see the end of her other nostril, and her lips look a bit off.
I'd also suggest less of the hard shading upon her nose and a little more of the hard shading upon her upper lip.

Now the perspective, her hand needs to be more bigger, naturally your hand is suppose to be about the size of your face(or so they say).
So the further away her hand is from her face, the bigger or smaller of her hand will become, depending on where you position it. (In this case it will be much bigger since it's closer to the audience.)
To add more depth, I reccommend moving her hand and arm slightly over so her shoulder covers a bit of her cheek.
I'd also add more soft shading to her arm to round it out, it looks a bit flat right now.

Moving onward to her body, I see that you have her collar bone quite low, move the angle of her collar bone back up.
The folds on her shirt are lovely, they are quite smooth and have good sense of direction. :]
The only exception it the one random harsh fold on her breast closest to us.
I also like the little details you put in, like the design on her corset(or at least that's what I think it is xD) and the light pattern on her bra (unless I'm mistaken. :'D)

Overall, I think you did a great job, the feel of the picture portrays an almost challenging aspect. :}
Prespective Practive
Thank you :)
Aidori
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