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Skyward Ch15Pg5 by GECKO-Nuzlockes Skyward Ch15Pg5 by GECKO-Nuzlockes
Please let me know how the Chip/Freedom dialogue looks. Can you read it, or should I try a different method of showing that they're speaking telepathically?

Also, I just wanted to add a note about some choices in this chapter. I was hesitant to bring Chip back. Yes, he's a ghost and he actually won't appear very often or influence the story much, but I did want him to remain in the comic because his personal story isn't resolved yet and I still had plans for him. I understand that people may see this as a poor choice or a cop-out from his death and I'm more than happy to discuss it in the comments. But know that I did think long and hard before making this decision and I believe it will work out for the better of the story.

As always, thanks for the support! You guys rock!!

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ElizabethKita Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ghost chip coming along? Very intesreting...
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Porecomesis Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
Just so you know, with Chip on the left and Freedom on the right, it looks like their speech bubbles are reversed and belonging to the wrong person.
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GECKO-Nuzlockes Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oops! i'll be more careful with that next time. thanks for letting me know :D
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