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Atieno by GDBee Atieno by GDBee
For =theartsygurl :la:

Her character Atieno~


Holy flip guys thanks for your support!
This is in a bunch of groups >_>
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:iconrotegruetze:
This is my first critique and I'm not a native speaker too, so if there is anything incomprehensible please ask me so I might express myself more clearly. I hope this critique satisfy the requirements and helps you.

The whole picture gives me a very harmonic impression. The bright colours underline the expression of the character. You caught a facial expression that shows light-heartedness and happyness as well as the whole pose of the body.
Since the face is very detailed it's definitly the centre of the picture which catches the viewer's I at first sight. The butterflies are as detailed as her face and give the picture a more dynamic look. A very successful composition.

In my opinion there are just two little points to criticize:
Since the character is the centre of the picture the attention is slightly distrcated by the black cat in the tree. Because you used very bright and shiny colours the black of the butterflies' wings as well as of the fur of the cat are a strong contrast and form the highlights of the pic.
Whereas the butterflies circle round the character and lead the viewer's eye on her the cat stands out of the main focus and tears the eye to the upper left corner.
Besides the slightly rougher drawn tree's trunks and branches don't fit the very detailed foreground completly.

In general, the picture is a well drawn piece which creates a brightly mood and puts the character good into focus.

Gruß
RoteGruetze
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:iconlkururugi2518:
LKururugi2518 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2016   Traditional Artist
Gorgeous.
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:iconcandylolz:
candylolz Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2015
Love it!!
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:iconwill612612:
will612612 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015
Amazing! I love it!
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:iconblkanglsluv:
BlkAnglsLuv Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my Goddess, she's so frickin' cute! Love her!  {Gift} Free Human Twi icon   Heart  Love  :happybounce:  Clap  Heart  
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:iconsombraluz-images:
Sombraluz-Images Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Professional General Artist
I love the little skull in her fro. :D
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:iconguillmon9005:
guillmon9005 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
LOOOVE IT! :D
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:iconcorpor8chic:
corpor8chic Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
All your work just makes me smile...its so sweet & innocent the very essence of pinup!
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner May 11, 2014
Ahh thank you! It's sorta kinda what I was going for IIRC c:
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:icondjele:
Djele Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
This is amazing!
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:iconkaestarr:
kaestarr Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
beautiful!
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:iconacaciathorn:
Acaciathorn Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Charming! I love her expression and air of endearing playfulness.
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:iconicartoonfantic:
ICartoonFantic Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012   Digital Artist
Absolutely Gorgeous!
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:iconchadcomics:
ChadComics Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty!!
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:icononyisart:
OnyisArt Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I still can't get over the fact of how pretty this looks! If I ever turn her story into a movie(which I hopefully will). This MUST be in there!!
Now that I think about it. I need to start working on her more. . .
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
It could be a background easter egg lol
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:icononyisart:
OnyisArt Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
LoL
:iconbunnyhumpplz:
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
NSFW! XD
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:icononyisart:
OnyisArt Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
-_- ABCD
I have to look up these acronyms! LoL
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Not safe for work :giggle:
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:icononyisart:
OnyisArt Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I know that now! ;p
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:iconlt-snuggs:
Lt-Snuggs Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lovely!
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Thank you very much :D
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:iconavasquezart:
AVasquezArt Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Beautiful girl
beautiful background
excellent work
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Thank you very much :hug:
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:icontokenabc:
TokenABC Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can place this on my scraps?
This look so much like a character I like That I would to keep a reference for Commissions and such. I will give to credit if you give me permission?
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Sure :hug:
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:icontokenabc:
TokenABC Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thx a million
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:iconxxxoudyxxx:
xXxOUDYxXx Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
everthing in this is breatinh perfection.
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
You really believe so? Thank you! :love:
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:icontokenabc:
TokenABC Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Too bad theartsygurl LEFT DEVIANT ART and toke her character away from our viewing pleasure.
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:icontheartsygurl:
theartsygurl Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Yeah the original is here! [link]
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
Oh noes! D:
She has something similar on her tumblr: [link] :)
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:icontokenabc:
TokenABC Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This drawing reminds me of another character(OC) I like alot.
I wanted to fav this under different category then just a regular fav but no.
I guess this one of those what if drawing drawings in my eyes.
What if I commission something like for another character.
Thx for making this.
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:iconkismet2k18:
kismet2k18 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so beautiful! My favorite part is the afro, it's simple but still so cute! And that expression on her face!
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:iconmr-nik:
MR-NIK Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
So harmonious and gorgeous, I love how her skin catches the greens from her surroundings.
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:iconjadthedog:
JadtheDog Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Thanks for feeding my jungle fever! :D
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Ugh...you're welcome ^^;
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:iconjadthedog:
JadtheDog Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
I may have said too much. XD
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:icondimensionalplay:
DimensionalPlay Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg seestur, this is greatttttt ;o!
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
Who are you?? :ninja:
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:icondimensionalplay:
DimensionalPlay Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IDK.
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:iconjulia-aurora:
Julia-Aurora Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her face is lovely, as well as the pose :) Great painting!
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
Your paintings are better :nod:
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:iconlordbishop08:
LordBishop08 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
This is Awesome!
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
:highfive:
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:iconstarcru:
starcru Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
lol nice.who is she??
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
She's =theartsygurl's original character :D
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:iconsharkberry:
Sharkberry Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Student Filmographer
This is grahhh!!!! (good. it's good.)
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:icongdbee:
GDBee Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
ur mom is grahhh :paranoid:
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:iconslaphoeproductions:
slaphoeproductions Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
great job!
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