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Flashshadow's avatar
Looks like the gauntlet has been thrown! Time to see if Makoto can handle the badass queen of gas, Yuta! B-)

Also crotch fart, FTW! :drool:
Gchris5523's avatar
It sure has! Find out in the next chapter!
Also thank you~ ^-^
AzureTornadoKick93's avatar
Makoto at the end said some pretty meta shit. All of what he said was valid points.
reducedlow's avatar
oh man it just gets better and better!
Oh-Nara's avatar
Woah...so I'm binge reading this series today if it isn't obvious. This my favorite chapter so far...so good~!

Is the scene where Makoto is interrogating Yuta about her fetish inspired by Ace Attorney? I have a feeling it is.
Gchris5523's avatar
Thanks a bunch man! I'm glad you're reading it on a binge! Makes me feel all warm inside; thank you!

Actually.... no. I wrote these scenes WAAAY before Ace Attorney was even made, I think... Fun fact of trivia: the interrogating scene is one of the few parts of the entire series that is left written word for word as it was all those years ago, but I just played the Pursuit from Edgeworth Investigations and it is AWESOME.   :D
Oh-Nara's avatar
Oooh wow that's really cool! And really good stuff too, it is quite in-depth and quite well worded even from all of that time ago. Very nice!

Investigations is such a great game! Still though I missed the good ol Feenie, the boy in blue, the LEGENDARY LAWYER. Wright, is what I'm saying. He's one of my favorite video game characters.
Gchris5523's avatar
Aw gee thanks man! It really means a lot to me to hear you say that! Thanks man, seriously.   :D

Yeah, I love those games! But.. I WANT to like Phoenix, I REALLY DO! But.. He's such a garbage lawyer! He can't solve an actual case all on his own! MILES on the other hand is pro... MY favorite guys in the series are Gregory Edgeworth and Raymond Shields. Oh GOD I love those two! So classy and cool.... Yeeeaaaahhhh...~
DreadLockedCipher's avatar
This fantastic chapter had everything: gripping suspense, a swift punch to the feels, and chemistry galore! Seriously, even though this is my fourth time reading this chapter, Grace's brownie story still makes me tear up like a wee baby. Also, Makoto, you Fool! Surely, Yuta the Empress will pull no punches!
Gchris5523's avatar
Wow, 4TH TIME? XD Thanks man! You flatter me so, but I really need to re-write these earlier chapters... they make cringe.  ;~;

Also, thanks!
DreadLockedCipher's avatar
No problem, sir. :D To be honest, this series was the inspiration for me to start writing again. As such, reading the series over and over is never boring to me.
Gchris5523's avatar
Ae geez thanks man! Glad to hear that!
chewbacca111222's avatar
Awesome. This series is so good, I can't even give you criticism because I like it too much! Seriously, this is really good stuff!~
My only gripe though doesn't necessarily pertain to just this story or you, but it is the association with outright corpses and garbage with the smell of farts. Of course, rotten meat and such would smell like that, but the terminology is a little offsetting, you know?
Gchris5523's avatar
Nice! I'm glad you like it soo much! Yeah, I'll be sure to stop that part of terminology. BUT; when it comes to Grace's Meat and Milk farts, I will not go easy. XD
chewbacca111222's avatar
Oh, it is fine, I was just saying it is weird in my taste, but I can understand the pure stench of digested meat and milk behind her farts. Keep up the great work!~
Gchris5523's avatar
Thanks, I'll try to keep the good work up!
chewbacca111222's avatar
And I will try to read the rest as soon as possible, even though I read chapter 7 prematurely a couple of weeks ago...
So, that will be a weird comment.
chewbacca111222's avatar
Yes indeed, my friend. How are you faring, by the way? I meant to ask a while back but keep forgetting like a pizza shit!~
Gchris5523's avatar
I'm doing alright; for now. But thanks for asking yo!
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AwkwardMoon45's avatar
Again, chapter as good as ever, the part at the end, I found, was hilarious how Makoto was like "oh shit, OH SHIT, oh shit, oh shit, OH SHIT!" I just couldn't stop laughing at that XD
Gchris5523's avatar
XD I try to make believable dialogue, : D
AwkwardMoon45's avatar
Well, to be fair, now that I think about it..........that's actually how I would react in that situation. Although knowing me I'd probably say it out loud instead of thinking it XD
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