Beautifully colored. I love the simplicity you utilize in your work--it draws out the elegance of your figures. Even cooler, you combine that simplicity with a proportionate accuracy that pulls the work off. Great job!
Technical improvements, it looks... cleaner somehow. Colouring is a bit more vibrant. That saod, it´s a lovely piece, but for possitioning and background, i would prefer the original if i had to chose.