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Inprovement by GameyGemi Inprovement by GameyGemi
Oof puchi played with the paper and destroyes it. Fucking cats...
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Opheriats Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2017  Student General Artist
Hiya~~ You improve a lot wow! I wanna try to help you with what I know because your art style is really cute >///< (Actually, It always a pleasure to see your work ~)

   * The elbow is maybe not enought high, just up it a bit and make the forearm a bit longer (I've got this problem too before xD)
   * The left leg look really nice, but the rigth one look a bit weird (You struggle to draw it no? we can see the erase one so I think it's not a big deal, just a random fail)

Actually for these ones , it's just my opinion, not anatomy big deal, just the thing that make me uncomfortable xD

   * Maybe put more volume on the hair on the head, not big change, but it will make the hair better for me, because it's seems really flat here :s just a little bump on the root? (sorry I try my best to speak the best english I can but it's hard xD)
   * I don't know how you spell the little pink stuff on the paws, but the big one , you should make it bigger, because animals get it much bigger than the other ^^

It's not all, but the other thing don't bother me much, it's just need some improvement and attention, and actually, like the clothe is a bit simple, I have this problem too, and I'm too lazy to test new thing xD

Hope I help you a bit, and don't worry, I know how it feels when your cats destroy you traditional drawning (and I actually hope we can maybe one day do a meme or drawning collab or trade :D )
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December 26, 2017
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