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Giving other characters a chance
Usually, you would find submissions under our group messages with either Sonic or Shadow (whom I happened to be a diehard fan of) with at least one of the Mane Six. Each year, this trend has been predominant .
I am thinking that there should be more fanmade materials on other characters. It can be Tails, Spike, Knuckles, Big Mac, IDW characters, the Student Six, villains, and many more. It doesn't have to be just Sonic or Shadow with a Mane.
This journal is merely an advice. Not a direct order. You are free to submit crossover art however you like.
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I go by "Galeshine", "Gale" or "Shiny". Usually, I write, Draw, or do Sprite Animations. (Role play too xD)

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Chapter 1:
Cursemark - Chapter 1Dear Mom and Dad,
    I love you and I'm sure you feel the same way. However, I am not sure how I should say this or where to even begin with this letter. I am in tears writing this...
    Something awful happened. Because of that Something or other that had happened, I can't see you anymore. I'm not sure where I will go. But I only know that as long as I am here, I put your lives in danger too. Please stay safe...
        --Your daughter,               --Alicia.
        P.S: Don't try to find me. Don't try to look for me. I am Cursed.
                                                    

 C U R S E M

                                                        C U R S E M A R K

                                                                             Chapter 2:

                                                                                              Agony



[Let's go back to one year ago...]

  Spark messed up Alicia's mane with a hoof,
    "Happy Birthday, Ali. It's cool that it's finally come around. Say. How old are you todaY?"

    Alicia frowned and raised an eye,
    "My parents don't really talk about my birth a whole lot. In fact, Let's see...It's been a good...9 years? They're not that old yet. Mom's Birthday is coming around though and so is Daddy's so...Yeah- I feel more 9 years old than 8 years old."

    Spark smiles,
    "Well, Happy 9 years of surviving life. We should do something before the day ends. Maybe we can go over to Skylight's place and fool around again?"

    Chrysti pushes Spark down playfully,
    "No thank you. Big Ro-Ro said we couldn't go over anymore because somepony decided to go into her things."

    Spark gets up slowly, eying Chrysti carefully. His blue eyes locked onto Chrysti's Red eyes silently as he got up all the way,
    "Big Ro-Ro. Where did that nickname come from? You know we can't call her `Rosie` because she gets like super mad when we do that."

    Chrysti makes a mouse face,
    "Because it's cute."

    Fuse inspects Chrysti left right and all around,
    "Sounds Masculine. What would be cute about masculinity?" He says sniffing her butt.

    Chrysti kicks Fuse,
    "Stop that!"

    Alicia just laughed,
    "Silly Fuse."

    Fuse smirked,
    "Oh, You're healthy today! You've been eating a lot of vegetables!"

    Chrysti blushes,
    "Dangnabbit, Fuse!"

    Maelstrom raised an eye,
    "Ali, Have you decided what your talent is going to be yet?"

    Alicia nodded,
    "We have school tomorrow. I should be able to discover it by studying and exploring. I think I would like to major in Psycology. I could be like a Therapist and help ponies with their issues in sanity. You know the Mental Hospitals that are around? I could work with the Psychopaths and probably get them back to being sane again. Though...My True talent is something I have to discover on my own and for myself. You remember what Angie said about Butt Stamps."

    Galestorm shook his head,
    "Cutiemarks...But Butt Stamps works too. Is she the one that called it that?! xD"

    Alicia nodded,
    "Actually, Cutiemark sounds more appropriate. I forget sometimes how bad of an influence Angie is."

    ["So we played around a little more near the clubhouse for the rest of the day and having fun like any good kiddo would do and the day passed pretty quickly. Yeah - Even Birthdays. Every single day seems to belong to be a birthday to somepony or someone. Maybe I say "Someone" because humans do exist in this 'guarded barrier' side of Equestria - In the world that surrounds us, We call this "Augmentia" which was established by the Late Queen and then later founded by the present Queen. The Rules between Equestria and Augmenetia are slightly different but only directing at beliefs about violence since beyond that barrier, We can't see them and they can't see us - As long as the barrier is up. Where is this barrier? At the far end - At a place called "Equestria's Edge" where the boundaries between the world of ponies that believe in harmony and the world of ponies that believe in protection and will do anything to have it. Protection. Power. And Perserverance. While those things don't exist in Equestria, They do exist here in Augmentia. As for the Humans...]




    ["The Queen said that the Humans play a much bigger role for later on in our interactions with eachother. The Hand and Hoof Treaty was signed between the Queen and a figure in a Dark Cloak claiming to be the owner of something called "World Gates" which who can say that even I know what they are. The major point I can get across is that nothing could prepare us this year for what was to come. I thought my birthday was going to be the best thing ever. Later on that night, It takes a turn for the worst."]




["That night after dinner and after our bath and heading to bed - I had a dream. In this dream, I was a grown adult with goals that I wanted to achieve and promises that I wanted to keep. Well, I did it in this dream- I became a Psycologist. A Therapist who deals with emotions and keeping one's sanity or at the very least - Bringing it back to them. This paitent I was working with ended up behaving rather strange. As I was talking to him, He began trying to hit on me. I of course rolled my eyes at the thought of romance for a while just because I wanted everything to come at its own time and not be rushed. Anyway, After telling him "No, I do NOT date my clients" for I don't know how long, He looked me in my eyes for a bit and just stared at me in silence. I did the same to him and even squinted my eyes at him to make sure that my hoof was down. This was my dream and I didn't want anything wierd happening in it - So yea, I put my hoof down and stood my ground. He backed off after a bit only up until the dream suddenly transitioned out of my control."]

["It transitioned to what looked like a large citidel that stood surrounding a red sand ocean. I didn't question the second fact - That I was now little again even though I probably should have but the thought just sank in to explore and see what else could possibly happen in this "Interesting" dream I was having. I walked in - Into what looks like a long dark and nerrow hallway stretched out to be a wide corridor. Torches lit up on the left and right - Almost temple-like. I walked and walked for what felt like hours but was only mere minutes because apparently, The Torches from up ahead stopped as I approached an altar-like area. The room was so cold that I almost woke up from the chill I felt. Suddenly, Everything went pitch black and I heard laughing. Blood Curdling screams and laughing - which wasn't a very good mix. When the screams faded to silence, The laughing got louder and closer for a moment. Then, I saw glowing blood red eyes and they jump scared me so horribly that I ended up turning around the other way and running back. As soon as I did, I felt something bite me on my left arm which then caused me to scream in pain. The last thing I could hear before waking up was the evil laughther followed by the last thing I could see was a Wraith Pony. My Cousin's Mother, Queen Ayori warned us about the Nightmare Realm. About a sadistic Wraith Pony that goes by the name of Agony. Above all things else he seems to love torture, cruelty and brutality. But the most leathal thing he loves to do is Jumpscares which cause panic attacks and even anxiety attacks. But the most scariest thing he has ever done was actually Bite somepony. When a Wraith Pony Bites, It leaves a Cursemark on the victim - To which it shortens their life. I know not much about the Cursemark only that - Those that are cursed become a burden to those around them."]

    Alicia woke up from screaming. No pony could hear her of course because everypony was asleep. In the dead quiet of the night, Alicia tried to just breathe for a moment. She took a few breaths and got up out of bed. As she did, She felt a pinch in her right arm. She rubbed it and it felt familiar. Frantic, She immediately ran into the bathroom and cut on the light. She raised up her right arm which then showed a bite mark on it opening up more and more as a rash with several red bumps erecting upwards from her skin. That's when she realized - She was cursed. Deciding that letting everypony else know about this would alarm them, She decided to wait.

[Present Day]

    Her 10th Birthday came around and after a long time of down playing it, She couldn't take it anymore. The others began to notice strange behaviors from her - She started to eat less and even excused herself from dinner more. She started to sleep more during the day and less during the night. After a while, She told Ciaus about it on his birthday and they went to go see Lazarus about it. Unfortunately, The only thing he could provide her was three Lolipops specifically designed with an embued magic that responds to brain signals as well as more cardiovascular properties. By then, Just about everypony eventually found out about the rash which was getting redder and itchier the more she tried to ignore it. 

    So, Exactly on her 10th Birthday was when she wrote the letter. It was when she wrote the letter that same night that she ran away from home. It wasn't the Waterfall that she ended up seeking. It was the Nightmare Realm itself. She had gone alone.

        To Confront Agony.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Dear Mom and Dad,
    I love you and I'm sure you feel the same way. However, I am not sure how I should say this or where to even begin with this letter. I am in tears writing this...
    Something awful happened. Because of that Something or other that had happened, I can't see you anymore. I'm not sure where I will go. But I only know that as long as I am here, I put your lives in danger too. Please stay safe...
        --Your daughter,
               --Alicia.

        P.S: Don't try to find me. Don't try to look for me. I am Cursed.


                                                    
 C U R S E M A R K 

                                                Chapter 1: Alicia runs away from home



 Ara had pressed a hoof down against the door of the toolshed,
    "Geez. That's the sixth time this month that this door hinge messed up. What if we actually need this door for something? For, Oh I don't know- Actually opening and closing?"

    Noel hammered the rest of the nail in,
    "That would be pretty useful actually...If the door would stop swatting me and locking me in."

    Ara raised an eye,
    "Next time it happens, I'm going to ask Azel to help fix it. I'm rather tired of this door too, hun."

    Noel finished the remaining touches on the door knob and got up,
   
"That might be the better option if it happens again."

    Plum comes running towards the two,
   
"Noel! Ara! Jelly's ready for that Parent and Teacher Orientation. Where's Ali at? She's been quieter than a snake in the grass on a moody monday mornin'!"

    Ara giggled a bit,
    "Moody Monday Mornings...I think that's what we'll call those. xD"

    Noel shrugged,
    "Alicia was acting strange all last night. In fact, We haven't heard a peep from her all morning."

    Plum raised an eye,
    "If she anythin' like Ara, She's a smart girl. But she's anythin' like Noel, She won't keep her mouth shut for very long."

    Noel gave her a look,
    "Hey! Be nice."

    Ara smiled but then a worried look suddenly got to her and she turned to Noel,
    "Noel, Let's go check up on her. I am just a little worried. I have this strange gut feeling that something is wrong."

    Noel nods and leads the way without question. The three head for Alicia's room inside of the Saddle Family house.

[Alicia's Room]

    Her room is completely organized from top to bottom and her bed is well made. Sitting by her bedside is a desk. On that desk is a letter sitting there under the lamp light.

    Ara picked up the letter and read it...
Dear Mom and Dad,
    I love you and I'm sure you feel the same way. However, I am not sure how I should say this or where to even begin with this letter. I am in tears writing this...
    Something awful happened. Because of that Something or other that had happened, I can't see you anymore. I'm not sure where I will go. But I only know that as long as I am here, I put your lives in danger too. Please stay safe...
        --Your daughter,
               --Alicia.

        P.S: Don't try to find me. Don't try to look for me. I am Cursed.

     Ara could feel tears welling up,
    "Cursed? Is this some sort of...No. It's no joke. Ali. She wouldn't joke about something like this. Noel, We need to find her!"

    Noel contimplated for a moment,
    "I'm curious as to why she believes herself to be cursed or why she believes that she presents herself as a threat to everypony at the ranch. Ara, We're going to need to do some investigating and gather some information before we go after Ali. But think about it. There's only ONE place she would go."

      Plum stepped in,
    "So, Ara. Noel. Ali was complaining about having Nightmares. The Kiddos - More specifically, The Gals noticed something wrong with her long before the Colts did."

    Ara turned to Plum,
    "What did the girls notice?"

    Plum shrugged,
    "I'd gather some sort of rash? Ali was rubbing her right arm quite frequently all day yesterday."

    Ara's tears began to get worse,
    "And just how long has this been going on?!"

    Plum rubbed a hoof under her chin,
    "I reckon it's been goin' on since her last birthday. She just didn't say anything. Probably cause' she didn't wanna worry you both. She's a very sweet lil' filly. The poor dear is probably scared no pony will believe her or that they think she's pullin' some sort of prank. But there were signs. She's been staying up late a lot more and staring up more and getting more and more distant as of late."

    Ara bit her lip,
    "Noel, What do we do...?"

    Noel put his hoof down,
    "I know she said not to find her...But this is her home. We can't just leave her out there by herself."

    Ara thought for a moment,
    "The Waterfall! The Cave behind the Waterfall we showed her! I have a feeling that's more likely where she went."

    Noel nods,
    "Then let's assume that for now she's okay and try to get some more information before we rush out. Plum, Did she describe these nightmares?"

    Plum withdrew her hat down,
    "She started taking naps during the daytime hour because of it, But then she would describe the `Nightmares` as something terrifying. She would see a figure - A scary image with razor sharp teeth. This happens when she keeps her eyes closed for long periods of time. As a result, She's been irratable without sleep and hasn't been able to think straight either. Athena was over one night for a homework assignment she was helping her out with - They were studying together that night when Alicia fell asleep on her schoolbook. It surprised Athena when Alicia woke up crying mere moments later. Something spooked her. Then, Athena said she saw that rash glow a blood red on Ali's Arm. Said that it was painful and making her scream a lot - So she wanted to but she didn't in fear of wakin' up everythin' including the cows in the barn. That next day since then, She didn't talk a whole lot and Athena has been doing some research into stuff like this. The way Ali seemed tired and out of energy looked as if something was hurting her and well uh, Killing her from within."

    Ara put her hoof down,
    "That's enough info. We're finding her. NOW!!"

    Noel nodded and began heading out with Ara to the Moonflow Waterfall.

    Meanwhile something Sinister lurked behind them both as Night Time Hour approached...

TO BE CONTINUED...
Chapter 6 here:
The Leader (Freewrite)-6Chapter 5 here:

    Chapter 6: Defense of Abnormia
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Ghramis' Castle
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Ghramis: "WHAAAAT?! Wart was defeated?! IMPOSSIBLE!!"
Vermillion: "But it is true, Sir. We exibit this to be none other than belonging to the fighters of the resistance movement. They appear to be surviving and hold much grudge against the Tempest Bodies that have been sent out to rampage parts of the world."
Ghramis: "And what about the King Wolf? They escaped it?!"
Vermillion: "The Report just came in no more than about 15 minutes ago- An Attack continued on in Akiguro Caverns. A Survivor of that incident reported that the Megalodion Shark of that Underground water vein had lunged up and started eating troops left and right. The cause of this is rather odd. Sound vibrations were detected for an explosion within the area that blew up the Rockskiffs within it. It looks like your plan to make Akiguro Caverns into a Base of Operations will have to wait. The whole entirety

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Chapter 7: Countermeasures
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[The Royal Castle - Higher Abnormia]
{Night Fall}

    Gale and his group of friends make it into the Castle Grounds of Higher Abnormia only to be confronted by Tempest Bodies already storming the Castle. They rush in, Beating down every Tempest Body in the way and make haste to find the King, The Queen and Princess heading towards the upper chambers- Up further in towards the Ramparts of the Castle.

Gale: "That Ghramis! *He impales a Tempest body while kicking onto another incoming one and then, While holding onto his spear he pulls himself upwards, Kicking upwards so hard that an energy arc wave slashes it in half* He's gone too far! We're not all that far away from the Archious Region and it'll still be a while before we can travel out. Not even a chance to relax. We've already been fighting most of the day.

Panda: *Easily Claws through the Tempest Bodies going for him- Two strikes front on right claws and then three more to the back with left claws* "We're tired but, We'll persevere whatever to get through this. :0 How did they end up here?"

Roadkill: *Forms Dragon Claws and slashes. She gets hit several times with a few Tempest Body blades* "Tch. They're actually starting to get smarter. *Blows Fire Balls at the Tempest Bodies, Scorching them to nothingness and ash*

Bladefire: "Look there- At the Windows! They're climbing in from the Window Shafts!"

Panda: "Sounds like we've got little time to catch the Royals. You all go on ahead! I'll handle these!"

Gale: "Panda. Don't die."

Glass: "Please don't."

Panda: "I won't, Okay? Falcon! You're with me. Hiro, Back up Roadkill! She's hurt."

Hiro: "Which one was it?"

Roadkill: *Winces. Is also panting from losing some blood* "It doesn't matter which one did it. They're all responsible."

Hiro: "Then consider them all gone. Artemis! We need a Medic Class!"

Artemis: =.= "I need to fight too!"

Hiro: "Artemis."

Artemis: "Fiiiiine. *Changes Class to Medic* Just back me up. Ara! Azel! Move on ahead with Gale and Glass. The rest of us will take it from here."

Hope: "I'll go with Gale. I'll just be in the way if I stay."

Roadkill: "Wise call. Hurry before they surround us!"

Shatterheart: *Backing up Ara*

Flare: *Fires Ki-Blasts at the Tempest Bodies after her*

Viral: *Gets Stabbed in the left arm with a Sword from a Tempest Body*

Viral: *Sees Blood* >:0 "DIE!!" *Blows her Acid Breath at the Tempest body, Reducing it to Ash in Seconds*

Aile: "SIS!! >:0 You Tempest Bodies are messing with the wrong Girls!"

Viral: "Aile, Sis! Behind you!!"

Aile: "Wha-?!" 

*SLASH!!*

    Viral takes the sword to the gut for Aile.

Aile: *Gasps* "SISTER!!!"

Viral: *coughs up blood*

Artemis: "Aile, I've got Viral. Back me up! Ara! Azel! Move!!"

Ara: :0 

Azel: "That's okay. I need to redeem myself after what happened to me earlier. Ara, You go with Gale."

Ara: "A-Alright, But be careful."

Azel: "Don't worry. I've got your back. Hey Panda! Chuck one my way!"

Falcon: "I've gotcha Azel ol'buddy! *Shoves a Tempest Body towards Azel's Direction*

Azel: "Hehehe. PAYBACK TIME!"

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    Gale, Ara, Glass and Hope make their way on ahead to the Throne Room Chambers to find the Queen, The King and the Princess all fighting Tempest Bodies as well.

Queen Rena: *With her Blade, She holds her own in slashing through rank after rank of Tempest Bodies* "Linear, We can't hold this place for very long. They will not stop coming. You must leave this place!"

Princess Linear: "I'm not leaving you both and that's final!"

King Roy: "You will do as she says. These are higher ranking Tempest Bodies. You will get yourself killed if you are not careful fighting these."

Queen Rena: "How high in rank?"

King Roy: "The Rankings for these? In the 60's and 70's Range."

Princess Linear: "Really Daddy? That is too strong! We cannot fight these for long!" *She summons an ancient barrier of sorts to act as a protective membrane*

Gale: *Slashing through while also taking damage* "Oh, Geez!"

Glass: "Gale, You're taking heavy damage! These are too strong!"

Gale: :') "So this is why its prudent for Panda, Roadkill and Azel to be with me. I'm so reckless."

Ara: *Shoots an Arrow at a Tempest body about to end Gale's Life. The Arrow is powerful but then she reverts her power back to normal*

Ara: "Be careful, You flankhead. We can't have you dying on us."

Hope: "No one can." *He fires a Pop Rock from his slingshot. The Rock explodes in the face of a Tempest Body, causing his head to blow up like Fireworks*

Hope: 0_o "Who was the wiseguy that snuck poprocks in my pocket?"

Ara: "That would be me, you sillyhead. :3"

Hoope: "Niice! :0 You're Ara, right? The same one who saved me from Sir Crocodile Tears?"

Ara: "Yes. I don't regret my actions, But we have lives to save so we can catch up later, Okay kiddo?"

Hope: "I have a name, Ya old hag."

Ara: =.=# "Watch it."

Hope: o_O "Wait. That came out wrong. Slip of the tongue. Uhhmm...*Hugs Ara* I'm So Sorry!! ;-;"

Ara: *Rolls eyes and embraces the hug* "...Hope, Right?"

Hope: "Yeah. Not my real name, But that's the name I'm going with. I'm actually really nice. I don't know what came over me..."

Ara: *Tilts her head* "Hope."

Hope: "Yeah?"

Ara: "You Stink. Don't hug me. I...I just got done with a bath not long ago too. >.>"

Hope: :') "Oohhhh...I forgot about that..."

Ara: :') "You're gonna get it later, squirt."

Hope: "I forgot that I smelled like Frog breath. Now you smell like Frog Breath too."

Ara: *Eye Twitch* >:0 "I'm gonna murder you with tickles, Squirt."

Hope: "Not now. Later, Okay? We've got people to save, right?"

Ara: *Eye Twitches more*

Ara: [Keep calm, Ara. KEEP. CALM.]

Hope: "I also realized something else...This stench is really hard to get out of the hair."

Ara: "BOI."

Glass: *Jumps in to back up Ara*

The Tempest Bodies would keep reinforcing the dead ones with new ones.

Glass: "This is exhausting! *She turns to the King and Queen as well as the Princess who are fighitng the stronger ones and taking care of them themselves*

Ara: *Smirks * "A friend of mine was able to help enhance my arrows just a little bit. I can only use it once right now- At least until I get the expansion on it. I don't know exactly what it's called but- *She Fires the Arrow. The Arrow Splits into multiple Arrows. Every Tempest Body they target is annihilated with Black Flames*

King: "Those Arrows. Those are the Sacred Piercing Arrows of Legacy."

Queen: "They are also infueled by a Ninja Clan. No where near Setsuna's I am willing to bet."

Princess: "They looked like Ametaratsu, But that's not possible."

King: "These are different flames, you silly girl. Stop watching all of that Naruto Rubbish."

Princess: :')

Queen: *She sends her sword through the floor that creates a small circle embedded with only limited amounts of light energy. The small circle expands slowly restoring order back to the Castle*

Not long after that, Panda, Roadkill, Azel and Hiro come up with the rest of the group with Viral being fully healed and Aile remaining at her side even closer this time to her.

Roadkill: "Okay. Who the ___ Sent those sons of ____ out here?!"

Panda: "Probably Ghramis. We only got rid of the minor threats."

King: "You're absolutely right. We are still dealing with Two Tempest Bodies rampaging the City."

Azel: "Tempest Body Tyrants you say? THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT! I need to rip something apart right now and that's perfect."

Aile: "I'll go with you. I want Sis to be proud of me." *She hugs Viral super tight*

Viral: "Welp. I'm going to have to back you up now."

Hope: "Your Highness, While it is prudent for us to go back out there and kill off 65 Foot Tyrants, We're also terribly exhausted coming here all the way out from Akiguro Plains and Hutka Region. We had to run here."

King: "How absurd. I hereby grant you access to the Airship.

???: "Don't leave without me!! *Squeak!*

King: "Hm? Ah, Meri. Nice to see that you are still sneaking around."

Meri: *Reverts back to her Human form*

Meri: "Oh, I get around." *Makes cute mousy face*

Roadkill: "Personally, I see no point in using the airship. Flying objects get swatted down very easily which is why you don't see Military flying their jets out here anymore."

Panda: "Talk about a waste. c: I for one think we should stay on the ground for a little while longer- At least until things calm down."

King: "So then you would all rest up here and head out to Giles Region?"

Roadkill: "We'll earn our keep by keeping the city safe. Gale, Your order?"

Gale: "Panda, Roadkill, Hiro and Azel- You four are best suited for dealing with Tempest Tyrants. Pick a partner and go after them."

Gale: "The rest of us will go out and search for Survivors. The King, The Queen, The Princess and their people need to survive. To do that, We need to help them. Then and only then will we earn our keep here."

Roadkill: "Makes sense. Panda, Get your butt into gear. Let's go."

Panda: "Don't call me a Butt, you Butt. x3" 

Roadkill: "You amuse me, Human."

Panda: "Love me."

Roadkill: "Impress me. Make me Love you."

Panda: :o "Oh, I'll do it. You better believe I'll do it. c:"

Hiro: "Are you two done bickering?"

Azel: "Geez. Get a Room already."

Panda: "We would. Roadkill already knows I'm a beast in the bed."

Roadkill: "Panda, Your panties are showing."

Panda: :o "WHERE?!"

Azel: =.=

Panda: c:

Azel: "You Dork."

Panda: :') "That's me!"

King: "Meri, You'll stay with Gale in his Pocket. Keep an eye on him."

Meri: *Hops into Gale's pocket in her Mouse Form* c:

Gale: "Thanks, Roadkill. Remember you guys. We're getting Pizza after this!"

Panda: "WE GO! FOR THE PEPPERONI PIZZA!!"

Meri: *Shouts from her tiny mouse voice* "FOR THE PEPPERONI PIZZA!!"

Panda: c: "Close enough."

Gale: "I'll call you 'Mouse' if that's alright, Meri."

Meri: "I'm okay with that. Let's go help some people out."

    Gale and his pals split up into two groups to deal with the Tempest Tyrants and rescue the people from all the fighting at the sametime. That is to say, They save only who they can. In cases like these, time would keep flowing regardless of breaks. Knowing this, The group splits but also stay with at least one partner.

    Three stay with the King, Queen and Princess which would be Glass, Ara and Hope.

(More to come)
Chapter 1:
Cursemark - Chapter 1Dear Mom and Dad,
    I love you and I'm sure you feel the same way. However, I am not sure how I should say this or where to even begin with this letter. I am in tears writing this...
    Something awful happened. Because of that Something or other that had happened, I can't see you anymore. I'm not sure where I will go. But I only know that as long as I am here, I put your lives in danger too. Please stay safe...
        --Your daughter,               --Alicia.
        P.S: Don't try to find me. Don't try to look for me. I am Cursed.
                                                    

 C U R S E M

                                                        C U R S E M A R K

                                                                             Chapter 2:

                                                                                              Agony



[Let's go back to one year ago...]

  Spark messed up Alicia's mane with a hoof,
    "Happy Birthday, Ali. It's cool that it's finally come around. Say. How old are you todaY?"

    Alicia frowned and raised an eye,
    "My parents don't really talk about my birth a whole lot. In fact, Let's see...It's been a good...9 years? They're not that old yet. Mom's Birthday is coming around though and so is Daddy's so...Yeah- I feel more 9 years old than 8 years old."

    Spark smiles,
    "Well, Happy 9 years of surviving life. We should do something before the day ends. Maybe we can go over to Skylight's place and fool around again?"

    Chrysti pushes Spark down playfully,
    "No thank you. Big Ro-Ro said we couldn't go over anymore because somepony decided to go into her things."

    Spark gets up slowly, eying Chrysti carefully. His blue eyes locked onto Chrysti's Red eyes silently as he got up all the way,
    "Big Ro-Ro. Where did that nickname come from? You know we can't call her `Rosie` because she gets like super mad when we do that."

    Chrysti makes a mouse face,
    "Because it's cute."

    Fuse inspects Chrysti left right and all around,
    "Sounds Masculine. What would be cute about masculinity?" He says sniffing her butt.

    Chrysti kicks Fuse,
    "Stop that!"

    Alicia just laughed,
    "Silly Fuse."

    Fuse smirked,
    "Oh, You're healthy today! You've been eating a lot of vegetables!"

    Chrysti blushes,
    "Dangnabbit, Fuse!"

    Maelstrom raised an eye,
    "Ali, Have you decided what your talent is going to be yet?"

    Alicia nodded,
    "We have school tomorrow. I should be able to discover it by studying and exploring. I think I would like to major in Psycology. I could be like a Therapist and help ponies with their issues in sanity. You know the Mental Hospitals that are around? I could work with the Psychopaths and probably get them back to being sane again. Though...My True talent is something I have to discover on my own and for myself. You remember what Angie said about Butt Stamps."

    Galestorm shook his head,
    "Cutiemarks...But Butt Stamps works too. Is she the one that called it that?! xD"

    Alicia nodded,
    "Actually, Cutiemark sounds more appropriate. I forget sometimes how bad of an influence Angie is."

    ["So we played around a little more near the clubhouse for the rest of the day and having fun like any good kiddo would do and the day passed pretty quickly. Yeah - Even Birthdays. Every single day seems to belong to be a birthday to somepony or someone. Maybe I say "Someone" because humans do exist in this 'guarded barrier' side of Equestria - In the world that surrounds us, We call this "Augmentia" which was established by the Late Queen and then later founded by the present Queen. The Rules between Equestria and Augmenetia are slightly different but only directing at beliefs about violence since beyond that barrier, We can't see them and they can't see us - As long as the barrier is up. Where is this barrier? At the far end - At a place called "Equestria's Edge" where the boundaries between the world of ponies that believe in harmony and the world of ponies that believe in protection and will do anything to have it. Protection. Power. And Perserverance. While those things don't exist in Equestria, They do exist here in Augmentia. As for the Humans...]




    ["The Queen said that the Humans play a much bigger role for later on in our interactions with eachother. The Hand and Hoof Treaty was signed between the Queen and a figure in a Dark Cloak claiming to be the owner of something called "World Gates" which who can say that even I know what they are. The major point I can get across is that nothing could prepare us this year for what was to come. I thought my birthday was going to be the best thing ever. Later on that night, It takes a turn for the worst."]




["That night after dinner and after our bath and heading to bed - I had a dream. In this dream, I was a grown adult with goals that I wanted to achieve and promises that I wanted to keep. Well, I did it in this dream- I became a Psycologist. A Therapist who deals with emotions and keeping one's sanity or at the very least - Bringing it back to them. This paitent I was working with ended up behaving rather strange. As I was talking to him, He began trying to hit on me. I of course rolled my eyes at the thought of romance for a while just because I wanted everything to come at its own time and not be rushed. Anyway, After telling him "No, I do NOT date my clients" for I don't know how long, He looked me in my eyes for a bit and just stared at me in silence. I did the same to him and even squinted my eyes at him to make sure that my hoof was down. This was my dream and I didn't want anything wierd happening in it - So yea, I put my hoof down and stood my ground. He backed off after a bit only up until the dream suddenly transitioned out of my control."]

["It transitioned to what looked like a large citidel that stood surrounding a red sand ocean. I didn't question the second fact - That I was now little again even though I probably should have but the thought just sank in to explore and see what else could possibly happen in this "Interesting" dream I was having. I walked in - Into what looks like a long dark and nerrow hallway stretched out to be a wide corridor. Torches lit up on the left and right - Almost temple-like. I walked and walked for what felt like hours but was only mere minutes because apparently, The Torches from up ahead stopped as I approached an altar-like area. The room was so cold that I almost woke up from the chill I felt. Suddenly, Everything went pitch black and I heard laughing. Blood Curdling screams and laughing - which wasn't a very good mix. When the screams faded to silence, The laughing got louder and closer for a moment. Then, I saw glowing blood red eyes and they jump scared me so horribly that I ended up turning around the other way and running back. As soon as I did, I felt something bite me on my left arm which then caused me to scream in pain. The last thing I could hear before waking up was the evil laughther followed by the last thing I could see was a Wraith Pony. My Cousin's Mother, Queen Ayori warned us about the Nightmare Realm. About a sadistic Wraith Pony that goes by the name of Agony. Above all things else he seems to love torture, cruelty and brutality. But the most leathal thing he loves to do is Jumpscares which cause panic attacks and even anxiety attacks. But the most scariest thing he has ever done was actually Bite somepony. When a Wraith Pony Bites, It leaves a Cursemark on the victim - To which it shortens their life. I know not much about the Cursemark only that - Those that are cursed become a burden to those around them."]

    Alicia woke up from screaming. No pony could hear her of course because everypony was asleep. In the dead quiet of the night, Alicia tried to just breathe for a moment. She took a few breaths and got up out of bed. As she did, She felt a pinch in her right arm. She rubbed it and it felt familiar. Frantic, She immediately ran into the bathroom and cut on the light. She raised up her right arm which then showed a bite mark on it opening up more and more as a rash with several red bumps erecting upwards from her skin. That's when she realized - She was cursed. Deciding that letting everypony else know about this would alarm them, She decided to wait.

[Present Day]

    Her 10th Birthday came around and after a long time of down playing it, She couldn't take it anymore. The others began to notice strange behaviors from her - She started to eat less and even excused herself from dinner more. She started to sleep more during the day and less during the night. After a while, She told Ciaus about it on his birthday and they went to go see Lazarus about it. Unfortunately, The only thing he could provide her was three Lolipops specifically designed with an embued magic that responds to brain signals as well as more cardiovascular properties. By then, Just about everypony eventually found out about the rash which was getting redder and itchier the more she tried to ignore it. 

    So, Exactly on her 10th Birthday was when she wrote the letter. It was when she wrote the letter that same night that she ran away from home. It wasn't the Waterfall that she ended up seeking. It was the Nightmare Realm itself. She had gone alone.

        To Confront Agony.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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