"Hakim smiled as he took the brushes and swept dirt away from a piece of pottery. He couldn't help but pause to watch her working on her own pieces. She pursed her lips and blew some dust and sand away from an ornate shard of pottery. He felt like she was an angel softly blowing away a small puffy cloud."
I love the descriptions, man. That's great. You're a solid writer. The love he has for her feels real.
Currently, that's in my blogspot and the series is called GZ Legends. I don't have the hand ability (I'm actually losing coordination in my hands from possible MS) to do all the panel work, so I'm just a base illustrator compared to the panel artists. I write though! So it's an ongoing story and you can find the link in my Journal, or better yet, here's the link for parts 1-10:
That's quite an expansive universe you have there. And a wonderful imagination. Sorry it took me so long to respond. I just hadn't actually had a chance to look in depth at the link you provided me. But I'm looking through some of it now.