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Sally remake by gagaman92 Sally remake by gagaman92
Name: Sally
Age: 20-30
Gender: Female
Type: Demoness
Mood: Seduction
Affiliation: Evil
Specialties: Seducing men and drink their blood
Weaknesses: Light beams and fighting against stronger opponents
Likes: Fire and pleasing her father
Dislikes: Being annoyed and failing her fatherís duties

Sally is a seductive demoness whom she never really knew about her past, but she knew that her father named Trimon took care of her since her youth. Growing as an adult, Sally became renown amongst Trimonís army of soulless and evil demons and monsters. She is a very layback type of demoness, unlike some of her partners whom they get them on her nerves. She was also a very timid being for a long time, but her father helped her become stronger and made her choose which role she wanted to be. Her father always said that super beings roamed the earth and that his army of demons could not always win with force. Since Sally was very shy, she wanted to become a more attractive person, to seduce men. Her father was very pleased of her choice, telling her that blood was the most needed resource for his army to become stronger. At the age of an adult, she began to practice seduction behaviors so that she could suck on humanís blood at the right place and at the right moment. It wasnít an easy task, but she is very satisfied when her tricks work.


Hey guys and gals! Feel free to write me a "constructive" critique on this piece, please. :) I do not accept any immature or troll critiques, obviously. >_>
But my main question is: what have I improved in my technique?
Please be very precise on what Iíve improve compared to my old piece and what you think I should fix, remove or add. Thank you very much! :D

Old vs. New --> [link]
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Samthelily Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist
A very well done, bro. :3
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gagaman92 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Hehehe thanks, bra! ^w^
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Samthelily Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist
:D
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