The expressions are brilliant!
You are pretty good at facial expressions! Ever thought about getting a job as a professional cartoonist? I'm not sure what a professional critic would say about your talents but I'd say they can pass off for a professional cartoonist's. I like how you spice things up a bit and put something in the background, as most comic-makers pass on backgrounds. I also can't wait for the next installment! I also think you should feature lily's segments in your journals so that us deviants not watching both of you folks can get a these right when they come out.