No problem. Sorry I had to copy paste the critic twice cause it would not let me post it because it was not long enough... kinda stupid criteria on DA's part but what ever....
Love it! Soft, cute and sexy.... simple. the axe part of the guitar is slightly off, and one hand is a little bigger that the other. But everything else looks great! Boots, jeans, shirt and and face all nice. could have kept the same colour of the boots for the guitar to keep it on the simple side. Dunno if this helps. but you are def on the right track.
Love it! Soft, cute and sexy.... simple. the axe part of the guitar is slightly off, and one hand is a little bigger that the other. But everything else looks great! Boots, jeans, shirt and and face all nice. could have kept the same colour of the boots for the guitar to keep it on the simple side. Dunno if this helps. but you are def on the right track.
When ever you have an up shot of a jawline, don't draw the jawline. Instead play with colours and shadows to show where the jaw meets the neck and chin... Dr. Doom's head could be smaller (or bigger body) to make him look more intimidating. I also think cyclops' lens should always be glowing unless his eyes are shut...Sue and Richard seem to switch places (left and right) from pannel to pannel, but at this point am I nit picking. Great lines, colours, & composition! Please take a look at my gallery if you have a minute and leave some comments...
GOD DAMN THAT IS NICE!!!!!!!!!