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So I sketched Breezy out on paper, scanned her in, and used gimp to do the rest. :) I can't use my tablet because I am grounded //shhh so I used gimp instead.

I'm really happy on how she turned out! ^^ I would love any feedback on this :)
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Hello,i'm here to give you a very short critique!
so lets start ;p

Good things - i like how you did the pants,and the coloring on the shirt,I'm not good with anatomy but in my noobish eyes its pretty okay ;p

Bad things - well first thing i noticed,the line art is a little sketchy,is it because you used Gimp?Gimp always confused me.

Second thing i noticed,is that the shoes don't look like they have a shadow

-Maybe you should shade it darker or thicker,and the white parts also

the hands are okay,but it looks like the fingers would of been really long if she opened her hand

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:bulletyellow: Also,I suggest doing a shadow under the boobs too,

The shading on the pants is very good but the rest of the character's parts don't seem to have as good shading.

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That's it!
Hope it helped ;)
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Lasergeist Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
sorry im way too tired to do a full critique but there are only 2 flaws i can see anatomically with my tired brain
1. at this 3 quarter type view the shoulder facing you should appear longer and more sloped than the one facing away. you kind of have this perspective issue backwards.
2. her boobs. they look as tho either one is exponentially larger than the other or they are being forcibly smooshed slightly to the right. that could be fixed as easily as moving that curved line on the left slightly more to the left so that it looks more even
there's some boob-drawing tutorial on tumblr that i found very helpful i'll try and find it ltr
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Fyreglyphs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
asdjk;flaksjdfl;kasj dfi'm bad with boobs ><
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Lasergeist Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Theyre hard to get to look natural, and to find the best size for a character.
they're just a pain in the ass
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Fyreglyphs Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
agreed T-T I tried going off of pictures...

WOMAN GET ON ZHE CHATS :U
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Lasergeist Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
=~= i will tomorrow
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