MLP - Bloody Chaos' Story Part 1

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A door opens and a little filly with a crown on top of her head came running out.

"Be careful Celestia!" The filly's mother shouted.

"I will mother!" Celestia shouted back.

She run to the garden.

"Now what shall I play?" she asked her self, "I know!"

She crouch down.

"The brave princess of the cats crouches as she spots her pray," Celestia said.

Bushes shook near by. Celestia looked at it. The bushes instantly stopped.

I must be my imagination, she thought as she crouches back down.

The bushes started up again. Celestia looked at it again, but this time it didn't stop. She started to back away from it.

"Okay maybe it wasn't my imagination," she said.

A male red colt jumped out and roared. Celestia gasped and fall back wards. The red colt laughed. Celestia's brows meet and she got up. She marched up to him. The red colt gave a panic look and started to back up with ever step Celestia took.

"Why you little," she said, "do you have any idea who I am? Well do you? I'm the princess of Equestria."

"To be quite frank with you," said the red colt standing his ground, "I don't really care who you are. Your just like everypony else. No one is higher or lower then the rest. It's just the way some acted that makes it seem like it."

Celestia looked surprised at him.

"You're very wise for your age," she commented, "What's your name?"

"Bloody Chaos," he answered while bowing to her, "nice to make your acquaintance Princess Celestia."

She gasped. Bloody Chaos looked at her.

"Your eyes," she said.

and there goes that friendship, he thought.

"I know," Bloody Chaos said, "they're scary."

"No," said Celestia, "They're beautiful!"

Bloody Chaos jaw dropped.

Beautiful!? he thought.

all his life people ran off when they see him because of his eyes. His eyes were slitted and golden. The sclera was not white but black, giving him a demon like look. It was because of this that his parents abandon him as a baby. Bloody Chaos started to cry.

"Hey," said Celestia with concern, "what's wrong?"

"No one has ever said that to me," he answered.

"Why?" she asked.

"Everypony gets scared when they see them," Bloody Chaos answered.

"Well I'm not scared," Celestia said, "but right now you are in trouble."

Bloody Chaos looked at her with a puzzle look.

"You aren't suppose to be on the castle ground without invitation," she said, "but I know of way that I'll keep my mouth shut."

"That would be?" he asked.

"Play with me Bloody Chaos!" She answered happily.

"Okay," Bloody Chaos answered, "and call me Chaos."

Celestia smiled and tagged him and started to run off with Chaos chasing her.


make sure to read the artist comment :)
edit: I changed the title XD

This the first part of my OC Bloody Chaos :D I hope you all like it!

Next: [link]

Beta Reader: ~Peanutcat12

Adult Bloody Chaos: [link]

Close up on the preview picture: [link]
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Chiasenn's avatar
When she met Bloody Chaos, you said FILLY xD He's a COLT xD Filly is a female baby horse/pony A colt is a baby male horse/pony
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Oh okay XD I heard them get called the same thing by others, that's probably what got me confused
Peanutcat12's avatar
Chaos just has it rough :(
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yeah but he has Celestia now ^,^ *cough* not for long *cough*
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D: what you mean not for long?
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