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Forsaken One


Something I thought of a long time ago and recently/finally had some time to work on.

Feel free to give me critiques. As long as they're helpful. I want to improve :thanks:
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CitricLily's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I really love this piece of art! <img src="…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>
I adore the technique and the whole image. It’s very well drawn. The colors used are well chosen. The little blue spots and around the body of the woman and the fire in her hand are well placed and give the image more impact! The focus on the woman is pretty, I like it, that she’s not lying exact in the middle – so that the face is in the center.
It seems like the floor is only well detailed around the stone where the woman sits, but where no light is, there would be some dark stones nice. The light from above which is very thin fits perfectly, especially the ones in the back, make the floor look more interesting, even without little stones, like in the front. The background is well detailed.
The feeling of the whole scene is very dark but also extremely sensual and the glace, with that pose makes it even greater!
The only thing I would change would be the thing with the stones – but that’s my opinion, overall maybe more stones on the ground would look too much.
fusuichikaku's avatar
Hmm, you're right! lol I should try to find some time to add more rocks and other details in the background later. Thank you for pointing that out and thank you for critiquing :tighthug: I love how detail orientated you are! Great eye ^_^
CitricLily's avatar
I hope my english was right and you did understand everything :blush:
After all I love it :hug:
Enkeli-Kristalli's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

What can i say about this piece it has wonderful lighting,wonderful colours and wonderful features.
The lady in the picture looks almost scared but its a natural fear of something she feels will be scary at first but will make her feel warmth in the end. I love the blue electrical glow she has in her hands as almost as if she is made of magick and power i love how the hair is mermaid like also.Yet another very talented artists here on deviant art look forward to seeing more wonderful work from this artist in the future.
Wonderful work hun <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
fusuichikaku's avatar
Thank you for the critique :hug:
I love how you can see all that in my drawing. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Enkeli-Kristalli's avatar
im a deep person i always see more there in art :)
Spacegryphon's avatar
Most interesting picture, I must say :meow:
fusuichikaku's avatar
^_^ Thank you very much :hug:
Michi4's avatar
That's amazing! Nice coloring, shading and lighting. I like the pose, too.
fusuichikaku's avatar
Thank you so much for the nice compliments!
The pose was a bit tough, but glad you like it :hug:
Michi4's avatar
You're welcome!
Carsis's avatar
Oooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :drool:

I am quite memorized by this picture of yours :D
fusuichikaku's avatar
Why thank you ^_^
Carsis's avatar
Your quite welcome :)
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