fusuichikaku on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/fusuichikaku/art/Forsaken-One-203664722fusuichikaku

Deviation Actions

fusuichikaku's avatar

Forsaken One




Something I thought of a long time ago and recently/finally had some time to work on.

Feel free to give me critiques. As long as they're helpful. I want to improve :thanks:
Image size
2000x1115px 3.01 MB
© 2011 - 2024 fusuichikaku
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
CitricLily's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I really love this piece of art! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>
I adore the technique and the whole image. It’s very well drawn. The colors used are well chosen. The little blue spots and around the body of the woman and the fire in her hand are well placed and give the image more impact! The focus on the woman is pretty, I like it, that she’s not lying exact in the middle – so that the face is in the center.
It seems like the floor is only well detailed around the stone where the woman sits, but where no light is, there would be some dark stones nice. The light from above which is very thin fits perfectly, especially the ones in the back, make the floor look more interesting, even without little stones, like in the front. The background is well detailed.
The feeling of the whole scene is very dark but also extremely sensual and the glace, with that pose makes it even greater!
The only thing I would change would be the thing with the stones – but that’s my opinion, overall maybe more stones on the ground would look too much.