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Furiael

Zero drama. Only art.
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  • May 6, 1986
  • Colombia
  • Deviant for 11 years
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I think I should have commented on this LONG ago. *fails* But... I will give... A CRITIQUE. O.O;

Anyways, I must say that hours and hours of sketching are obviously noticed. Nor mentioning your adquired and now obvious shoujo style, I love the details you tried to give the picture, even if it's all "messy" and "sketchie".

The brush you used for Videl's hair was the right one. Makes her hair fall awesome over her shoulders and arms, although just as you gave her upper hair some hints of light falling over, you could have done the same with the pigtails. That would have given a better effect of movement. Apart from that, I don't have any aditional comment on Videl.

Now, Gohan-kun... How I love him. I like the effect of the two "expressions", so we're able to notice how wide are Gohan's eyes behind his saiyaman mask. The effect of reflect you put on him was good and you must continue practicing. It will help you to know where to apply shades, or in case you want to continue this style, to add some textures or B/W backgrounds.

Maybe it's me, but from the perspective of his face and stuff I think the chest is a bit too broad but... not that I mind about it. LOL.

You have still to practice the use of white brushes when two black objects are close or overlapped. It's clearly seen that you filled it after drawing and it has some parts without coloring that might substract some points of your hard, great work.

I think I have nothing else to say, and I hope you enjoy my attempt of critique. Bye!
Kissing the Hero--Redone
I was trying to change the perspective, so, if the head looks bigger, it was made on purpose. It seems it didn't have the impact I expected somehow. Anyways, I do understand what you mean. I've seen Nightow's work and even if he plays with proportions like that, he does pretty balanced bodies. I have to say that I've found my art in a between... Akira Toriyama and Kubo Tite have been the ones who have most influenced on my art, followed by Fujishima Kosuke. And about that leg... Ugh. I know it sucks, but it came from the lineart like that, and due to the complexity of the drawing, I found myself unable to be able to correct it.

About the fire... On those 20 hours, I didn't include about 4 hours of trying to do that stupid lightning effect, failing on the way. That's why I use brushes. Maybe one day I won't be stupid enough and do it, just like you do.

Thanks for all the suggestions and points you made clear on your critique. I do appreaciate it a lot. Let's see how it will go with this new style on my gallery. We'll see what will happen in a future.
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