Heart of a Dog Splash Page

This is the preliminary drawing for the first page of a GN I'm putting together. I sketched this out to get an idea of how I wanted the book to look in terms of style, so it's very rough. The drawing is pretty accurate to the actual story, and may wind up being the real first two pages, except eventually there will be panels to the right, and real inks and color, but with a very limited palette.

Any feedback is highly welcomed. I haven't drawn comics in years, so this is both scary and exciting!