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Catch the Autumn leaves. by fretless94 Catch the Autumn leaves. by fretless94
Catch them. CATCH THEM.
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fineartislostart Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I would have liked this a lot more if text had not been printed over the artwork. :/ The concept is cute and I realy like the colors and stuff but the text is really distracting.
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fretless94 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well, sorry for ruining the picture for you.
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fineartislostart Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
There's no need to be like that. It was just something I was suggesting you keep in mind for future work. Your artwork itself is not bad.
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fretless94 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
How about I put the text along the bottom?
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fineartislostart Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If you really would like to keep the text, I think that would definitely be the best way to do it. I would also suggest a plainer font, but my aestheticism and yours are probably different, so keep the font if you so desire.

I guess what I'm asking is, instead of text, is there anything else you could incorporate in the negative space? The color scheme is very inviting; perhaps some wildlife or a pile of leaves to balance out the composition? You could do a lot with it. I see lots of possibility. (:
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fretless94 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Okay, added the text to the bottom, and yeah, it does bring out the canopy of the trees better.
I'll probably add a mountain range or something later to fill up the empty space.
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fineartislostart Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, what a difference. I actually don't mind the text so much now that it's on the bottom and brings out the canopy more.

Ooh, some bluish purple mountain ranges with the orange leaves would look so pretty!
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