FrenetikFred

What is impressive about this photograph is how the message goes directly into the viewer's mind and create a feeling in his or her mind. The idea depicts a comportment that has been described, but with more power than what I have ever seen about it.

The realization of this piece shows a control over the story telling in photography yet a few points can be discussed.

The frame is very tight around the models and it may have given a bit of an air breathe to let a few centimetres around the right arm of the male model and not cutting his shoulder at this height but a little bit underneath the under arm. This would have also given the viewer a little more of the female model calf and back knee which is generally a very delicate and sensual part of the body.

The most impressive merit of this piece is to say so much only suggesting and using symbols of seduction and desire and this should be recognized.

Ah ok, I quite didn't look at the time of the capture. I had a look at your latest shots (on dA) and they look really great. Looks like your managed to master your art a lot better since the time! Keep on for your efforts, sure they'll pay!

Well black is a nice tone for expression, wider than one generally think ! And ALL the lols about the watermark

I like the texture the fabric gives to the portrait but the lazy glaze of the model is quite depressing and doesn't really match the feeling I have when I imagine touching the fabric which looks more like a summer, hence happy/smiling rather than lazy/depressive. Otherwise the work on the light is pretty cool, but the eyes colour doesn't look natural, too blue considering the skin colour. Maybe it's a problem in the postwork or in the makeup, I'm not sure about it though.

Nice work, I'm still wondering about the use of keeping such a large black side but eh...

On another topic, nice sneaky watermark in an "open-licensed" work...