I don't understand why you would make the clothing the way you did when you used that gradient mesh work on the person. It would be best if you stuck with one or the other.
I do value your input. I outlined the whole body originally. I started stripping away the outlines, I got to the way it is on the finished piece and I liked it. So I agree to disagree with you, lol.
The skin and hair and everything look absolutely great!! I'm not sure I like the black outlines on the clothes...it kind of reminds me of paper dolls that you would stick these paper clothes onto...doesn't really fit with the rest? But maybe that's the look you were going for I love what you do with the gradient mesh!!
Could you check this [link] and tell me what do you think about it?
It's a shortfilm that I made 5 months ago.
Thanks.