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Letter From The Princess by fr33z3dry Letter From The Princess by fr33z3dry
The baby is drunk!!
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Actually, this is pretty funny to read:)

It's very funny, Twilight Sparkle looks really good, you kept the joke short and simple, I really love the green slime, and I especially love Twilight Sparkle's reaction at the end:)

However, I do have three complaints.

1. Spike's face in the picture on the top almost looks normal but, Spike's face at the bottom picture looks dumb.

2. Spike's body from the waist up in both the top and bottom pictures that he's in, almost looks like he has no bottom, you could've move the black line on the bottom in both pictures, so it'll look very nice:)

3. Another thing that you could've done, is to add the library in the background, it would've help made your pictures stand out a WHOLE lot better.

The main problem that I have with this comic, is that do for the fact that there is no background in those two pictures, you'll start to notice more unwanted details:(

Other why's then that, it's a very fun comic to read:)

Great job =fr33z3dry, I really loved it:)
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Hehe, wonderful art, I love when Spike pukes... Well the originality is quite good but needs a little better version, I only gave you 5 stars in vision, technique, and impact except originality but don't worry, it's 4.5 stars. Well after Spike puke why she loses her horn? Is there a problem? Don't worry I just love the arts and it was a funny comic

Can you make more comics of MLP please? Thanks! :) It was so disgusting when Spike let it out but nevermind! This could be my last critique now


I love your artwork! 102 202 302! Hehehe
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:iconjcsstudio:
JCSStudio Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That joke was SICK (if you catch my drift)! I love it! XD
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:iconvincentthecrow:
VincenttheCrow Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She DID ask for it.
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:iconlibra-w:
Libra-W Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
:iconclevelandplz: that's nasty
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:iconw0nderbolts:
W0nderbolts Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
rofl thats disgusting
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:iconmadman03:
MADMAN03 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
Funny!
Yes it is!
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:icona-dawg13:
A-Dawg13 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
lol Nice :XD:
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
LOL.

My loyal and faithful student,

Here's my letter to you for today.

It's actually my vomit from last night.

Enjoy!

:icontrollestiaplz:
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:iconfr33z3dry:
fr33z3dry Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lmao XD
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
Glad you appreciate. :)
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:iconiamtheunison:
IAmTheUnison Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You'd think dragons couldn't drink alcohol since its flammable and dragons are supposed to be like walking furnaces. :)
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:iconfr33z3dry:
fr33z3dry Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good point XD
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:iconiamtheunison:
IAmTheUnison Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:)
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:iconyesimdeadpool:
YesImDeadpool Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012   General Artist
Guess even on Equestria they have a legal drinking age. XD
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:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Spike,STOP DRINKING
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:iconbrokengrayheart:
BrokenGrayHeart Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:icondrunkplz: ponies, they look like horses.
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:iconbennett57:
Bennett57 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its funny because underage drinking
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:iconjhunter89hjh:
Jhunter89hjh Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Twilight had wine? o.e
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:iconrain-twister:
Rain-Twister Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Spike from the .Mov*: Oh my God...dude, I'm tripping out again man *snickers*
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:iconcomicboy11:
comicboy11 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Photographer
Bwahahahahahahahaah XD
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:iconleohwzr:
LeoHwzr Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
Im pretty sure the baby dragon who belly flopped INTO LAVA... would have a higher tolerance for alcohol.

Also wouldnt it be like rocket fuel if he threw up?
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theoldhorse2 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
-.- baby dragons, hehe light weight, can't even handle wine, i was given lil sips of the stuff from ma dad's home made stuff, until they stop selling the chimcals,
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Chaos-force Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
Rarity wont be happy about her Spiky Wiky getting drunk,but then Spike may go on a drunken rant about his true feelings n' stuff XD

very nice!
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:iconfr33z3dry:
fr33z3dry Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes that would happen X3
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:iconmillenniumfalsehood:
MillenniumFalsehood Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
When I first saw him get a letter from the Princess, I actually thought for a split second that he was going to do this.
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:iconfr33z3dry:
fr33z3dry Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me too I'm all "the heck!?"
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:iconmillenniumfalsehood:
MillenniumFalsehood Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Also, the belching noise he makes when he does this reinforced the notion. I actually got a little sick the first couple of times I heard him do that (that part where he keeps getting them in Return to Harmony actually still induces a bit of nausea for me . . .).
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:iconcristopheros:
CristopherOS Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
again...








LOL!!
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:icondevinshadowv:
DevinShadowV Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconallthecircles:
allthecircles Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lock the booze cabinet, Twilight. You're a unicorn. It's not hard to use the key.
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:iconfr33z3dry:
fr33z3dry Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she can lock it using a spell X3
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:iconohthehumanityplz:
Ohthehumanityplz Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Somehow I always consider Spike's 'ability' to be called 'barfic' for a reason. :XD:
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:iconfr33z3dry:
fr33z3dry Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconmr-dusk14:
Mr-Dusk14 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Somepony is sleeping outside tonight...
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:iconfundz64:
Fundz64 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Professional General Artist
...and now for something completely different!
SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM-AM-AM SPAM!!
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:iconbonesatellite:
BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
I can't believe I'm laughing at something so disgusting. That's something I never would've done before ponies. This show is amazing.
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:iconnuke-mayhem:
Nuke-Mayhem Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:lmao:
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:iconcoolwashington:
CoolWashington Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconpootiet12345:
pootiet12345 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:icontwilightfacehoofplz: :iconsaysplz: that's not wine... its absinth!
:iconmlpspikeplz: :iconsaysplz: so that explains why I'm trashed beyond logic and reason... im going to go fuck something
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karkovice1 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
Look out, Rarity! :P
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:iconfr33z3dry:
fr33z3dry Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconfrankrt:
FrankRT Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Clever!
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:iconmadammayh3m:
MadamMayh3m Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ACK!! :D
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Marukio Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ha ha ha! Gross!
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Coltsteelstallion Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
XD good one
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ringsandamiss007 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
Remember kids don't do drugs and drink.
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:iconkarkovice1:
karkovice1 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
Actually, it's: Don't drink and drive, but sniff and fly. :D
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BB-K Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oops, gross! Disgusting! Yucky! :o
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Catyclept Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD LOVE IT :D
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supermarikfuntime Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
FR33Z3DRY!!!! >: (

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:iconohthehumanityplz:
Ohthehumanityplz Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't you mean :iconbronyplz: :trollface:
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