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Jack Dahl-Oracle File-READ THE DESCRIPTION by Foxy-Knight Jack Dahl-Oracle File-READ THE DESCRIPTION by Foxy-Knight
Oracle compiles the data, or lack thereof, on the mysterious warrior vigilante operating on the codename Fox. Here we have the story of his first unofficial case in Gotham City, how he first met his future Bro-4-Life Ronin (check out :icondkalban: for more info there) and crafted his civilian name Jack Dahl, here's looking forward for the Fox file. Huge thanks to both :iconroysovitch: and :iconphil-cho: for making Fox a part of the Earth-27 DC universe. If you wanna find out more you can check out :iconroysovitch: on his main page and check out the club here --> :iconearth-27: and if you can please support Roy and Earth 27 see this link for details www.deviantart.com/users/outgo…

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Oracle Files - Jack Dahl by Roysovitch and only use this image for critiques which you can then link to the artist.
Fox/Jack Dahl belongs to me
Earth 27 is the brainchild of :iconroysovitch:
Art done by the magnificent :iconphil-cho:
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Arasteia Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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This seems like a very interesting character profile. The layout is clear and easy to process and it catches the eye quite easily. The actual profile information itself is of a really good length, succinct and yet with enough information to provide a good background. And this might sound strange but I feel as if the drawing style really matches the font. I don't know why that really stands out to me but it does. One thing that I have noticed is that I find the colours of the font in the top right box make the words slightly difficult to read. It might be better zoomed in, but at this distance (the font also looks slightly small to my eyes but again this might be fixed if one was to zoom in) these really bright colours against the black background distracts my eyes a little bit. I think you might be better off with a slightly more neutral colour there. Otherwise though, this looks good to me! 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Student Writer
1- I edited it so you can zoom in now
2-the fonts are color coded so you know who is speaking
3- thank you very much, now may I ask what you thought of the character as well?
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Arasteia Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, yes, I know they're colour coded for clarity, but my thinking was that the colours were too bright. But yeah the zooming in definitely helps! Yeah he seems like an interesting character. There isn't much about his actual personality though, more his background, so it's hard to tell ^^; I know that profiles are really just about background stories though, so not much to do there :D 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Student Writer
Well there are other voxes which is him talking to other characters so that may help
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Arasteia Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, that would probably help :p
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Student Writer
and they are all in the comment club
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Spirito666 Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
not bad...
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Student Writer
Oh really, what appealed to you?
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Spirito666 Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the template is good, then the point of view is quite good
but I'm not very into super-heroes things really xD
The template just caught my eye
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Student Writer
Oh I see, well thanks for your two cents nonetheless
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Spirito666 Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my...what ?
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Student Writer
two cents means your opinion and thoughts
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Spirito666 Featured By Owner May 31, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooh I see, well, welcome
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Cyres1 Featured By Owner May 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Student Writer
Thank you very much, and thank you for the watch
may I ask what appealed to you
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Cyres1 Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
While I am unfamiliar with fox himself (I don't think I've ever heard of him, but my memory maybe failing me at this moment), I really like the way your provided the information. I am truly intrigued by how Barbara organised the information, or the lack thereof. It makes me think of this as almost a template of sorts to maybe organise my own information for my characters... hehe.

I apologise for not mentioning what I liked, and what appealed to me first off. I usually do in my comments, but it was getting late when I gave my above comment, and I just wanted to go to bed.

All in all, I found this to be an amazing work that intrigued my research, and data loving side of me.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Student Writer
You should check out his Fox file then, that shows him in suit, Fox is an OC you see 
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Cyres1 Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I was looking at it earlier :)
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Student Writer
did you leave a comment?
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:iconcyres1:
Cyres1 Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
No, but I did leave a fav. I'll probably come back later to leave a comment on it.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 15, 2016  Student Writer
Thank you for that =3
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AmbergrisElement Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
He seems to be a handsome and smart character,great concept!
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Student Writer
Be sure to comment on the original and please if you like critique here 
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AmbergrisElement Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Ah,ok.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Student Writer
Glad you like him and since you do, his Fox file will be out very soon
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stunsywow Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Sweet!
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Student Writer
May I ask what you liked about it?
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stunsywow Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
How anonymous he is to even Oracle. It jives well with his story you showed me a few months back
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Student Writer
Be sure to comment and fav the original by Roy
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stunsywow Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Will do :)
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Student Writer
Good show, and if you like you can do a critique here
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stunsywow Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I will. I'm just writing something right now about a new Gotham OC. You read the last one, but I decided it was kind of bad.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Student Writer
Well I will happily read this one if you like 
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool profile. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Student Writer
Thank you very much, any bits which caught your eye in particular

(Also so sorry I haven't noted in ages, University is in it's final stages)
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. Well, I can't point out anything in particular. I just like how everything laid out and its from Oracle's point of view.

(Nah, its fine. I've been pretty busy too.) 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Student Writer
Yeah, how did you like the Vox chat?
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like it. Makes you see how the characters are like interacting with each other. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Student Writer
I think Huntress rather likes him, don't forget to comment and fav the original
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, yeah. Right. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016  Student Writer
Good show
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