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FOX THE WARRIOR OF GOTHAM: INTRO by Foxy-Knight FOX THE WARRIOR OF GOTHAM: INTRO by Foxy-Knight

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Ladies and gentlemen, do you remember this?
www.youtube.com/watch?v=oQVC2z…
To many of us cartoon fans and devout batman supporters this was the most exciting this to see on television. Inspiration and me have a funny relationship but recently she seems to be sleeping on my couch and waking up at odd moments to give me ideas. Like this one:

Write a 5 page maximum comic script with no dialogue to convey an introduction in the same vein as the BTAS intro for your respective DC Original character. I had an image in my mind and I went for it, challenging my good friend :icondkalban: to do the same.

Okay when writing this script I used the same technique Bruce Timm did when drawing Mad Love. This was a technique he got from Keith Giffen which is to have the page kept on a three tier by Three panels. It looks like this
www.otakusmash.com/read-comics…

Fox, Lizzie and all their enemies belong to me
Black Mask, Gotham City and Batman belong to DC comics. Batman was created by Bob Kane and Bill Finger
Ronin belongs to :icondkalban: and if you wanna see his intro click here
Ronin Animated IntroRonin Animated Intro
Page 1
Panel 1
4 Robbers run out of a building as sirens blare and flash
Panel 2
Ronin (a silhouette) watches them from the rooftops.
Panel 3
He swings after them.
Panel 4
The robbers end up in an alleyway.
Panel 5
Ronin lands behind them
Page 2
Panel 1
Splash of Ronin posing, staff in one hand, the other in a “bring it one” gesture.
Page 3
Panel 1
The robbers charge
Panel 2
Ronin jabs the first hard in the stomach
Panel 3
He then slams his staff hard across the first robber’s face
Panel 4
He ducks the second’s knife slash and jabs his staff hard in the thugs crotch
Panel 5
He then tosses out jitterbugs
Panel 6
He shocks the other two robbers into unconsciousness.
 
Page 4
Panel 1
He handcuffs the robbers
Panel 2
He looks up to see the Batsignal
Panel 3
He launches his grapnel as the police arrive.
Panel 4
He watches the police take away the police.
Panel 5
He leaps from a nearby gargoyle
Page 5
 (His is a bit lighter than mine XD)
Art done by the amazing :icontraumwelt75:
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:iconamethystangel228:
amethystangel228 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017
Nicely done. Very inspiring.
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Student Writer
Yeah, it's a neat little challenge, Dan and Andy did it too if you fancy checking theirs out and i think your characters could do this kind of thing too it would be awesome!
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:iconamethystangel228:
amethystangel228 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017
I'm not great at the screenplay type stuff. Trust me, I've tried. It always feels...off. 
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Student Writer
I can understand that, we tend to be our own harshest critics but I do have faith in your skills. Worth a try if you feel up to the challenge
How did you find the pace of this intro by the way?
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:iconamethystangel228:
amethystangel228 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017
Pace was enjoyable, fast enough to fit an intro. 
I'll give an intro a shot, lol, but it'll be a bit. 
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2017  Student Writer
That's okay, feel free to take your time to rise to this challenge, there is no deadline
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:iconyugirl:
yugirl Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017
Damn you sure know how to script an opening!!
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017  Student Writer
Thank you, yeah I felt this conveyed the feel of the first arc
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:iconyugirl:
yugirl Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017
It's dark but not necessarily gritty. Like Samurai Jack
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017  Student Writer
Oh yeah that is a pleasing comparison, given Samurai Jack is a favoured show of the Dahls
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:iconyugirl:
yugirl Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017
Ha! What a coinkidink!
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017  Student Writer
Probably not, it played inspiration 
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:iconyugirl:
yugirl Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017
Fair enough!
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017  Student Writer
Feel free to critique and check out the armour for Fox's squad including older lizzie
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:icontraumwelt75:
traumwelt75 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really cool and cinematic. Great job. Il like the "metaphors with shadows".
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2017  Student Writer
yeah Fox is someone whom fights monsters so I felt it apt
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:icontraumwelt75:
traumwelt75 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it works very well and has imo a "the batman animated opening feel".
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2017  Student Writer
That was rather the point :)
This is inspired by the BTAS opening, thank you for seeing the feel
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