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Fox has to get ready for patrol but not before tucking in his little girl and giving her a bedtime story, Cassandra finds this heartwarming but is she prepared for the tickle monster...and is Fox ready for Cass when she doesn't wanna be tickled? Also now that Fox X Cass is a thing Oracle lays down the law with some well chosen words.

Jack Dahl/Fox and his adopted daughter belong to me and have been allowed existence in :iconroysovitch: magnigicent Earth 27
Please fave and comment on the original link here --> OC VOX Box 2- A Goodnight Kiss or Two by Roysovitch
To see more of them check out these links
Jack Dahl (Earth-27) commission Fox (Earth-27) commission by phil-cho Lizzie Dahl (Earth-27) commission by phil-cho Oracle Files - Jack Dahl by Roysovitch Oracle Files - Fox by Roysovitch Oracle Files - Lizzie Dahl by Roysovitch
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3wyl Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
It's pretty cool that we get a picture of Fox, Lizzie and Cass in the top right corner so that we can envision the rest of this scene. Having the colours there sync up with the coloured text works very well too, and renders the script form with the names on the side unnecessary. The descriptive elements in yellow help with the more visual aspects of what is happening.

There's some good humour in this scene between Fox, Lizzie and Cass. I think Cass is right in describing it as "Heartwarming", and each character is conveyed quite well in just a few lines, which makes this more effective. Heck, just the one line from Oracle sets Fox back on track with the mission, and adds its own humour to the scene so late in the game. It goes to show that there can be an engaging twist, even if it's minor.

This is kind of like a peek or preview of good times before something bad or full of action happens...kind of like the calm before the storm. That's the impression I get from reading this. :nod:

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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2016  Student Writer
This is indeed the calm before the storm, also hints to a E27 ship sailing. Jack as Fox either gives Lizzie a bed time story before patrol or gets back from a mission in time to give her a bedtime story. If he misses it he is very pissed off with whoever he is fighting
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3wyl Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
That makes a lot of sense! It's good to have a constant, that being Jack/Fox giving Lizzie a bedtime story, whether that's before a patrol or after coming back from a mission. Him getting pissed at missing it is understandable.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2016  Student Writer
and Fox and Cassandra are getting romantic a touch
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3wyl Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Which also spices things up! :nod:
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2016  Student Writer
We shall see more of that ship in future files which may be coming by the end of the month
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3wyl Featured By Owner Edited Aug 23, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
That sounds awesome! :nod:
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2016  Student Writer
Thanks, feel free to watch as in the E27 Fox is shipped with Cass so there will be love on that front
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feelcho420 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2016
This makes my cries
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016  Student Writer
Cries how? Good cry bad cry? There are so many different feelz
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feelcho420 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2016
It makes my cries in the good ways the feels is too much as you can tell by my username
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016  Student Writer
So what was the most feels here?
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feelcho420 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2016
Cass and Fox
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2016  Student Writer
I see. Why was that? Just curious
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feelcho420 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016
Am like cass, favourite character fox good chracter by you.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2016  Student Writer
Thank you
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yugirl Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
aaaaaaaw
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016  Student Writer
Do you ship it?
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yugirl Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
Mayhaps
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016  Student Writer
May haps?
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yugirl Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2016
A combo or maybe and perhaps I don't know enough of ether to entirely ship yet
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Student Writer
So your hanging by the lifeboats of the ship then, so should it start to sink you'll be among the first to get off
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yugirl Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016
Personally i don't see cass getting with Jack, or anyone for that matter.
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2016  Student Writer
Yeah, I've heard that before, Andy told me she's a precious cinnamon roll so it's hard to imagine anyone good for her
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Dkalban Featured By Owner May 30, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
awww
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 30, 2016  Student Writer
yeah, bedtime stories before patrol, and some friendly advice on romantic pursuits
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Dkalban Featured By Owner May 30, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
yep
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tbrendia Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, this is cute. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Student Writer
Thank you so much
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tbrendia Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Student Writer
I am done with uni so I can note again
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tbrendia Featured By Owner May 29, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Okay, cool. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2016  Student Writer
And on Monday we are back
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tbrendia Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016  Student Writer
see you soon
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