Jack Dahl/Fox and his adopted daughter belong to me and have been allowed existence in magnigicent Earth 27
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And also Joseph Kane/Ronin and Sam Kane belong to my good friend whose noir detective is Fox's bro4life and Sam may be shaping into a future son in law (watch out Sam, she's a mandalorian...AND SCOTTISH!)
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Joseph Kane commission Ronin commission Sam Kane commission Oracle Files - Joseph Kane Oracle Files - Ronin Oracle Files - Sam Kane
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This is very different from the works I’ve seen of fan-fiction. I have to admit though, it looks rather professional, Roysovitch did a mighty fine job from what you commissioned. I like how there’s a mouse button, and a few other buttons, making this look as a secret chatroom of sorts. I’m guessing something’s going on between two of the characters, and someone’s playing around with them. I do like how you put Barbara’s (secret) life into the story, along with Cassandra Cain (she sounds familiar). Having the different colored icons that match with the colored letters helps us see who is who in this particular story (or chat). However it took me a while to figure that lol. Maybe next time have their name, or last name (ex: Kane: Uh… please don’t) start off their line. It might help clarify things up a bit. Another factor might be to separate the lines a bit more between each line so it makes it a bit easier.
Overall though, there’s nothing much to this. I rather like the work put into this, the grey border surrounding the entire work, and the W symbol on top. You have the credits in visible white letters on the bottom, and give credit on who belongs to whom. The design is great in the upper dark grey panel where “Access Granted” is at. A might fine job.
Overall though it's fairly entertaining, though I'm not sure one as to why one of the characters (Elizabeth) talked that way, I assume it's her playing around, and judging from all the actions it sounds just like that. Fairly entertaining for how short it is, and is a nice read. You almost want to find out as to why these characters were doing such a thing- I got hooked near the mid-end though.
2- Lizzie speaks that way because she is Scottish
3- They were playing a video game, one of those MORPG
Yeah in this continuity Fox/Jack Dahl and Black Bat/Cassandra Cain are being shipped
I experimented with putting names and giving extra space but ended up just using the colors as space was at a premium and wanted to be able to have plenty of room to cover bigger scenes.
In short snippet scenes, I do widen the gap between lines.
Feel free to check out the rest of the series on my deviantart page.
Also, Babs you perv! Eyeing the men like that!
And don't worry Sam, the Fox won't hurt you...so long as the Scottish mandalorian in training still likes you