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Earth 27 VOX BOX 01---READ THE DESCRIPTION!! by Foxy-Knight Earth 27 VOX BOX 01---READ THE DESCRIPTION!! by Foxy-Knight
Jack Dahl tries his hand as the overprotective parent when Lizzie shows quite a bit of affection for Sam. This escalted quite quickly and leads Lizzie to do her shipping forecast (shipping meaning SHIPPING) and whilst Cass agrees she is still hungry.

Jack Dahl/Fox and his adopted daughter belong to me and have been allowed existence in :iconroysovitch: magnigicent Earth 27
Please fave and comment on the original link here --> OC VOX Box 1 - Hot Buns and Warm Hugs by Roysovitch
To see more of them check out these links
Jack Dahl (Earth-27) commission by phil-cho Fox (Earth-27) commission by phil-cho Lizzie Dahl (Earth-27) commission by phil-cho Oracle Files - Jack Dahl by Roysovitch Oracle Files - Fox by Roysovitch

And also Joseph Kane/Ronin and Sam Kane belong to my good friend :icondkalban: whose noir detective is Fox's bro4life and Sam may be shaping into a future son in law (watch out Sam, she's a mandalorian...AND SCOTTISH!) 

To see the Earth 27 stuff on them check out these links here
Joseph Kane commission Ronin commission Sam Kane commission Oracle Files - Joseph Kane Oracle Files - Ronin Oracle Files - Sam Kane

Earth 27 belongs to :iconroysovitch:
Art done by :iconphil-cho:
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:icondoubledande:
DoubleDandE Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2016   General Artist

Hello, good day, I’m from ProjectComment .


This is very different from the works I’ve seen of fan-fiction. I have to admit though, it looks rather professional, Roysovitch did a mighty fine job from what you commissioned. I like how there’s a mouse button, and a few other buttons, making this look as a secret chatroom of sorts. I’m guessing something’s going on between two of the characters, and someone’s playing around with them. I do like how you put Barbara’s (secret) life into the story, along with Cassandra Cain (she sounds familiar). Having the different colored icons that match with the colored letters helps us see who is who in this particular story (or chat). However it took me a while to figure that lol. Maybe next time have their name, or last name (ex: Kane: Uh… please don’t) start off their line. It might help clarify things up a bit. Another factor might be to separate the lines a bit more between each line so it makes it a bit easier.


Overall though, there’s nothing much to this. I rather like the work put into this, the grey border surrounding the entire work, and the W symbol on top. You have the credits in visible white letters on the bottom, and give credit on who belongs to whom. The design is great in the upper dark grey panel where “Access Granted” is at. A might fine job. :thumbsup: 

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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2016  Student Writer
Well you've given much comment to the appearance so now I must ask what you thought of the content
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DoubleDandE Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016   General Artist
The content, it's not that half bad. I was lost at first, not knowing if this was a continuation from something, but I was able to follow it along pretty well (almost like ease dropping into a conversation and just listening a bit before moving on). I rather like how the characters played around with each other, not to mention they all seemed like they were playing a game(?) or playing around with each other. On a side note the characters, Barbara and I believe Cassandra seemed to be in character. Cassandra Cain is the Batgirl/Batwoman with no mouth hole, or am I thinking of someone else? 

Overall though it's fairly entertaining, though I'm not sure one as to why one of the characters (Elizabeth) talked that way, I assume it's her playing around, and judging from all the actions it sounds just like that. Fairly entertaining for how short it is, and is a nice read. You almost want to find out as to why these characters were doing such a thing- I got hooked near the mid-end though. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2016  Student Writer
1- Cassandra was a batgirl without the mouthpiece, and now she is Black Bat
2- Lizzie speaks that way because she is Scottish
3- They were playing a video game, one of those MORPG

Yeah in this continuity Fox/Jack Dahl and Black Bat/Cassandra Cain are being shipped
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DoubleDandE Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2016   General Artist
Oh I see, makes sense now. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2016  Student Writer
yeah, context is key
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Roysovitch Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thank you DoubleDandE

I experimented with putting names and giving extra space but ended up just using the colors as space was at a premium and wanted to be able to have plenty of room to cover bigger scenes.
In short snippet scenes, I do widen the gap between lines.
Feel free to check out the rest of the series on my deviantart page.
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:icondoubledande:
DoubleDandE Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016   General Artist
You're welcome. 

Ah I see, well that makes sense. After all more content is better, but it's glad to see you've experimented with this before settling on something you like. 
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tbrendia Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, this is cute! 
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 12, 2016  Student Writer
Dad mode activated
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tbrendia Featured By Owner May 12, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah. Fox is quite the father. 
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 12, 2016  Student Writer
He's not a patronizing parent
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tbrendia Featured By Owner May 12, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can tell. 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 13, 2016  Student Writer
I look forward to lizzie's file
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tbrendia Featured By Owner May 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool, can't wait to see it! 
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 13, 2016  Student Writer
Me too
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yugirl Featured By Owner May 11, 2016
Sophie: I think I'm crazy! I think I'm going out of my mind! I think you're shady! I thought I saw you touching my guy! Are you crazy? Now I'm gonna take you outside! And show you crazy! Ooh I got your crazy!!
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Student Writer
Sorry sweetie, Earth 27, different continuity. Come on Lizzie is dead in the main one, here she survives 
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yugirl Featured By Owner May 11, 2016
I'm sure I can convince Sophie to share besides she's too old for him in earth 27. I just thought I'd play with the idea of battle for Sam's affections haha
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Student Writer
yeah well Lizzie is trained by Fox and is Scottish
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yugirl Featured By Owner May 11, 2016
Sophie loved him first :P
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Student Writer
Fair enough, but in the E27 Sam and Lizzie are canon
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yugirl Featured By Owner May 11, 2016
Ok that's fair
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Student Writer
There we go
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Dkalban Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Run Sam!!!

Also, Babs you perv! Eyeing the men like that!
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:iconfoxy-knight:
Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Student Writer
Hey nothing wrong with a bit of admiring, I'm sure all of the men have done it themselves.
And don't worry Sam, the Fox won't hurt you...so long as the Scottish mandalorian in training still likes you
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Dkalban Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
True :)

Still, Sam might want to increase his training, for his safety
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Foxy-Knight Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Student Writer
And to keep up with the Scottish lass
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:icondkalban:
Dkalban Featured By Owner May 11, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
yep!
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