Here's the last one for now, more may follow later but this is it for now.
nice work here, how's my chapter 5?
Rhys will have the verdict in the morning, he's been busy today. He's also doing better
wonderful, i hope he is fine and well. i can wait on the comment, good to see he's doing okay.
Yeah, also ever thought about critiquing?
hmm, i can't? wait...oh you mean his chapters, sure, I'll crituque the next one